the render needs to blend more, and it needs more FX. It looks like a bunch of brushes plaed around a render.
k thanks like i said its my first one so i was just screwing around wen i made it thats wat CnC means .......
It looks great! But it needs less vivid colors. Only use black, grey and white and a little touch of cream color.
Slim Shady eh xD Hmm, its nice. I like your contrast colours, red, white and black. I do love those kind of signatures, so great job on that. But I don't like the render. I suggest getting a normal picture, from a photoshoot, instead of a render, and then use some gradient maps to find that red-white-black contrast. Or a texture. I like the background, but I don't like the S and S thing. Try just putting Slim Shady or S.S. in small font. but other than that, its really good. Nice choice of artist =]
I think its Kool and Awsome -_-' unlike some people here...--> jk it is awsome though i want to save it..but i think you should get rid of the peach or darken it a lil...
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=12216^ Learn to f***ing CnC. Anyways, yeah, make the font smaller, I like the BG, but the text is way too big, first I thought it was an actual part of the BG XD.
Dark Shadow, STFU and learn to CnC or get out, you don't need to post teh same thing 10 times. As for the tag it is way way, to cluttered. Those lines on the sides are not really working to way, it frames him but in a really bad way and they are sparatic. The giant S's need to go cause those are throwing it off as well. You need to work on your flow and depth, it is just to cluttered, and there is no real clarity in what is going on, nothing is blending together. Look up a few tuts, check planetrenders they have alot of good ones.
kk thanks not CnC thanks alot its my first human sig so waddya expect lol yea i donno how to fix it how do i fix the s's? kk thanks like i said before first one so i didnt expect it to be that good
