Roxas's Days in the Organization (Chapter 7 and the rest)

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  1. Xx Axel xX Traverse Town Homebody

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    I just re-read the ending, the very last section, and I got very sad. I once read in a writing intucutal book thing that if you're moved while writing, the reader might be moved as well. I didn't like the way I wrote this entire story, but I must admit I liked my ending now that I really read it over. Thanks alot for the comment. =DDD
     
  2. Riyza Merlin's Housekeeper

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    o_o Wow.. that ending was... simply.. amazing.

    Your whole story was amazing, one of the best ones I have read! =D
     
  3. coolgirl200 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    O_O THAT...WAS...AWESOME! I can't even think of anything else to say... *speechless* wow...lol
     
  4. Xx Axel xX Traverse Town Homebody

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    Thanks everyony! me, and prolly everyone author out there, loves comments! so, KEEP COMMENTING, and do every other author a favor, and comment on their stories too!
     
  5. Amethyst Grave Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Me has a confession....Me cried at the end.
     
  6. Xx Axel xX Traverse Town Homebody

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    Wow...That made my day. It's always an author's goal to move the reader, and I'm so happy now that I read that. Everyone else who reads this story, please comment! It helps me so much and motivates me to keep writing. Also, comment on every other story you read by any other author, it only helps! =D