roxas the lost story,

guys im sorry i abandoned this its just that, i had the new chapter ready, and was about to post it when my troll computer turned off, i got pissed and kinda forgot about this but i will edit this post later today with the end of my story ;D

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Spoiler: CHAPTER FIVE

R O X A S ~ T H E ~ L O S T ~ S T O R Y

Chapter ~ Chapter Five: "The Rebirth."​

They walked into a very Obscure beach.
-What is this place? - The boy said dimly
-We call it “The Realm of Darkness”-
-I am the leader of an organization of people like you, people who are incomplete and wish to be whole, and if you join us, then we can achieve that Goal.-
-What goal?-
-Kingdom Hearts, the heart of all hearts, the kingdom of all kingdoms, we must collect strayed hearts and if we Are successful, we will each be granted our hearts, and become complete, however…-
-Yes? – The boy asked
-If we are not, we will fade to this place, now do you understand how crucial it is for you to join us?-
-Yes… Xemnas I Will join you! - The boy declared
-Excellent- Xemnas replied.
-Now shall we only need to perform a certain ritual… - Xemnas explained and then held his hand out and the word “SORA” was in front of the boy’s face.
-Xemnas I… I understand… but this feels… wrong… - the boy said.
-What do you mean? – Xemnas asked.
-I mean that in some way, it feels like you should not be the one to tell me this… and not here… - the boy said
-Namine! – Xemnas raged under his breath.
-Very well- Xemnas said as the “SORA” disappeared in front of the boy’s face.
He then put his hands in the boys head as bolts of nothingness came into it.
The boy had fainted again, so Xemnas grabbed him and used his pathway to go to the front of a mansion, were Xemnas laid him down on the grass and left.

~X-X~

A few hours later, the boy woke up, But this time he remembered Nothing. Xemnas came to see him.
Xemnas walked up to the boy after he got up and said -You seek answers… -.
He made the word “SORA” appears in front of his face and finished –I can give you purpose. – making the letters S O R A Spin around his head, and then he put his hand over the boy making a Yellow “X” appear as the letters were rearranged into “ROXAS” And so, Roxas was given His name. Roxas said His name Confidently.
“That is right- The new you” Xemnas said with a smile.

~END~
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Very clever what you did there Anti. Good work keep it up.

 

kk, I intend to write an original story of mine in the future, thanks for reading, I hope you liked it,

if you wish to read it with corrections and Images, go to the first post. You might like it.

 

Oh Damn son!!!!! I liked the first page. Yeah you better write your story......unless you want to get charged down by fan girls.