roxas growing up in the organisation

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chapter seven-bad training
it was two years since his sisters death,roxas was seventeen now and had been going out with namine for a year,he sat in his bed rubbing the back of his head,he didnt have school today,but he had lots to do in the organization,he also had training with saix today,he got out of bed,it was to eairly for him to change out of pj,which was a sleevless top and shorts,roxas walked down stairs yawning,he walked in the dinning room,namine sat in his sisters old seat,namine had told roxas she was a nobody and xemnas he agreed to let her move in with roxas,but she wasnt part of the organization,roxas took his seat next to namine,
"roxas.why arent you dressed yet? you know you have training in half and hour"xemnas said
"couldnt be botherd..."roxas mutterd rubbing his eye
"go get dressed now! training move to now!" saix spat
"what?! aw come on! i didnt even get to have breakfast!"roxas said
"go,now!" Saix said,roxas sighed and stood up and ported to his room then ported back when he was dressed,they all went to the training room,roxas walked with namine,demyx and axel
"Ok roxas,dont try to hard...you`ve been doing that alot lately"axel said
"dont worry...i wont..."he walked he smiled
saix passed him with xemnas"his sister was never the greatest fighter either...i wouldnt be suprised if he didnt put up a fight,if you ask me...weak nobodies such as himself and his sister deseve to fade away..."
"so your saying raxya deserved to die?"xemnas said
"yes"then they walked on,roxas hunched his shoulders hearing everything,looking at the ground
"roxas dont listen to him..."axel said
"im not"roxas said
"then dont get mad..."
"too late!" roxas said he was angry.very angry,the keyblade appered in his hand,he walked away from the other three and walked in the training room,
"oooohhhhhh someones not happy!"larxene giggled when roxas had slammed the doors open,
"One two three! begin!"xemnas said saix rushed at roxas with the claymore,roxas moved to the side of it and hit saix in the stomach,but didnt move away in time as saix hit him in the back,the fight lasted awhile that is until,saix hit roxas up in the air then smacked him with the claymore,roxas hit the wall and slde down,he was right under axel,namine,and demyx seats,
"roxas!"namine said
"come on...dont give up..."axel said but everything was going dark to roxas,
"roxas! dont give up! you can beat him!"his sisters voice filled his head,he got up,coverd in dust and cuts,he ran at saix again ,but saix was to fast and knocked him into the again,this time roxas stayed down,out cold,roxas woke up in his room,axel demyx and namine waiting for him to wake up
"uhhh,,,wha-what happend?"roxas asked sitting up
"roxas..take it easy..."axel said"saix won..he kept hitting you after you passed out,he broke a few of your ribs and your arm....the rest of your injuries are cuts a bruises"roxas fell back on his pillow and closed his eyes again
"we`ll go...let you get rest"axel said leaving the room with the other two,roxas fell asleep again

 

oooh! 100 more thumbs up! I used sut outs XP

 

chptr 6 ws the ONLY piece of literature that made my eyes watery. and in chptr 7 if i was roxas i wood hav killd saix

 

Out of all i give it 100% on the story and chapters:D
Its getting good!

 

thanks heres the next chapter :D
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chapter eight-i quit!

it was a few weeks after the training,roxas sat with everyone else in the white room,they were talking about someone named 'sora' and he was apperently putting a stop to their plans...word had reached them that he planned to stop them with his friends,everyone but roxas knew who sora really was....who roxas really was...apart from roxas himself...noone had ever told him his sombodies name...and he probaly didnt want to know... not yet anyway and if he ever did meet his sombody...he would ask him...how...how he got the keyblade...how he`s so strong....,but for now thoe had to wait....this 'sora'was coming and coming fast...they planned to put everyone out to stop him,
"you cant put roxas out there....sora would kill him"saix said
"whats that supposed to mean?!"roxas said angrily
"It means i think your weak..."saix said,roxas glared at him,he was ready for a fight
"i also mean your usless....like your sister..."saix said smircking
"SAIX!"axel said in anger
"well its true...she was..."
"im warning you!"axel said ,roxas had summond his keyblade
"whats that matter roxas? cant handel the truth? you know your weak and so was your sister!"saix said,
"thats IT!"roxas said throwing his keyblade at saix and porting to the floor and walking away
"roxas get back here now! you could be a hero for us all! you could stop sora!"xaldin
"No!"roxas said and kept walking,axel looked at demyx then they nodded to xemna,they went after roxas
"rox wait up!"axel said "where are you going?"
"outta here...im not helping here anymore!"roxas said
"huh? your leaving?!"axel said"dem leave us just now..."demyx walked outside
"yeah thats right im leaving..."roxas said
"you cant! xemnas is right you could be a hero for us!"axel said
"im a lost cause,not a hero! they`d let me die and get their hearts than help me...why should i help them...?"roxas said
"roxas...dont go...get on their badside and they`ll destroy you!"axel said
"no one would miss me..."roxas said walking outside,namine had gone to stay in twilight to a week ago...
"roxas! dont turn your back on us!"axel said
"too late...i feel like its me aganist the world here...see you around axel...."roxas said
roxas words echoed in his head no one would miss me...."thats not true..i would.."axel mutterd looking down
"oh roxas..."demyx said once he`d seen him go."sorry buddy..but if we ever meet him...you know what we need to do...."demyx said to axel
"yeah i know...traitors arent aloud here..."axel said he sighed"im gonna miss that kid..."
"Me too...."demyx said
"he made me feel like i had a heart you know?"axel said,demyx nodded
"Once he was the life and soul of the organization..now...hes gone...."
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chapter nine-three tratiors....

a three years after roxas had left the organization axel and demyx were giving orders to either get him back or destroy him,but now after a year of looking for him xemnas did not care for if roxas came back or not....the orders had changed,
"axel,demyx...its clear th boy is not going to come back...so im giving you new orders...find him...and then....destroy him..."xemnas said
"what?!"demyx said,he looked at axel
"no! im not destroying him!"axel said
"yes.you will...."xemnas said
"Or....you two`ll be destroyed...."xaldin said raising a spear,demyx shudderd but axel glared at them
"you really think i`d kill my best friend?"axel said
"you dont have a choice..."xemnas said"now go....if he fails to respond...take the girl...and if you fail...i`ll use my back-up members...who will kill the brat..."xemnas said
"whos that?"demyx asked
"us"larxene said and marlxuia nodded,axel glared at them
"Get goin`!"xigbar said.axel and demyx ported off,larxene and marlxuia followed, roxas sat on the tower in twilight town now twenty years old...he had married namine a year ago and had a daughter and son with her now,nobody could tell him what to do...nobody had for three years.he ported off the tower and started walking to his home,he walked through the sandlot that is until two portals opend and axel and demyx came out,roxas glared and crossed his arms
"good to see you again...roxas...."axel said"cant belive its been three years...."
"yeah..."roxas said"why are you here?"
"so what have you been doing roxas?"demyx askd avoding the question
"im married and got two kids..."roxas said
"really?"axel said"thats great"
"Yeah.you still doing xemnas`s dirty work?"roxas asked
"its not-"demyx said
"I think i know why your here...to get rid of me right??"roxas said
"No!...well yeah...but we dont-"
"you can try!"roxas said summoning kingdom key"
"look roxas...we dont want to...we dont want to be in the organization anymore....not if it means...killing you..."axel said
"Huh?"
"we quit..."demyx said
"well well well....if thats the case...we need to kill all three of you"larxene said jumping froma roof
"like i said you can try"roxas said going into battle stance
"Larxene..go get our friends...."Marly said,larxene dissapperd then came bak a few mintues later dragging namine,who was holding two babies
"namine!"roxas said he started to run forwards.marly threw out his arm
"uh uh uh..."he said teasingly"you dont get to see them .....larxene go....i`ll take care of these clowns...",larxene nodded and dissapperd with namine and the babies,roxas pointed his keyblade at marly
"your so dead!"he said angrily
"heh....you wish!"marly said,then there was a fight and demyx got knocked away by marly,roxas did a few strokes of the keyblade and marly dissapperd,but so was demyx.he hadnt dissapperd..he was fading...
"demyx no!"roxas said,he and axel ran over
"come on dem! dont give up..."axel said"you cant!"
"see ya guys....."demyx said he turned his head to look at the sky,then closed them finaly he faded away,roxas and axel watched him float in the sky
"demyx...no...."roxas said mutterd,axel got up
"we need toget namine and your kids back before xemnas does anything to them!"he said he dragged roxas up"come on!" he shoved roxas in a portal and walked in after him,then it closed.now roxas only had axel,he knew he had namine and the kids....but axel was the only person who he had left that he`d known all his life...he wasnt going to lose him....not if he could help it....----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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That was so...COOL I loved that chapter actually i love all the chapters!!!!
i can't wait for more whenever:D

 

yup subsciption is in prrogress. luv dat new chptr

 

love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Thats good. =^-^=

 

*waits for next chapter*

 

OMG AWESOME FANFIC! Wow... *actually cried* T_T lol please keep writing!

 

aww no new chapters yet. :(

 

this is good i read it only today and i am hooked.

 

this fanfic is heaps good! cant wait for more :D i actually almost cried for demyx D:

 

new chappy pease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Stop procrastinating SORA! and post the next chapter!

 

sorry...i dont have any ideas right now....and i've been busy...

 

i guess theres only one thing left to do... WATCH DEATH NOTE!!!