Traditional Art Roxas and Namine

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Hakurei Reimu, Mar 3, 2008.

  1. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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  2. Sanda Kingdom Keeper

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    Hey this is really cute! It's definitely got that 'Simple&Clean' look down ;D (Oh gawd, badddd KH joke)
    Anyway, I like their expressions. I'd just work on Namine's body positioning, the shoulder looks a bit off. Other than that, very swell indeed~
     
  3. Black Sinner Twilight Town Denizen

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    Very cute! This is very good, though Sanda is right about Namine. And her arm looks a tad short, but other than that, this is a great pic.
     
  4. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    Aww

    very pretty <3

    yeah the arm needs to be a little wider and longer, and it would look perfect <3

    lovely pic
     
  5. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    INCEEEEEEEEEST LAWLZ!!!!!

    Kay seriously speaking.

    Reiterate Sanda about the arms. But I'll also add that the head look slightly TOO big for the general size of the body. Also, their hands are supposed to be much larger.

    That's it though, super cute drawing. ;D
     
  6. Shuhbooty moon child

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    The action! xD
    I really like this drawing it looks real. Like you know not 'plain'. It looks really good! Roxas and Namine looks Really awesome! <33333
     
  7. Wulphie! Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Work a bit on Roxas's left hand and add a little more detail to the doodle such as pointyness.You made the chin,lips, and nose a bit pointy, but other than that
    Perfect!!!!!!!!
     
  8. Ravenyuki Traverse Town Homebody

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    This makes me think of RO-MANCE! It's a nicely drawn picture. l like that you shaded some of it. Suggestion: More details on the hair.