Roxas and Namine - Chapter 6

Hi people!!! The poll results have came in and it looks likie Xaldin will tell Roxas himself that he ripped Namine's drawings, and becasue I hate Xaldin soooooooooooooo much......hehe **evil smile**....he's going to get hurt reaaaaaaaally badly......

World that Never Was, Dining Room

Roxas was sitting at the dining table, reading his manga. Xaldin entered the room. Eventhough Roxas already knew Xaldin had just entered the room, he ignored him completely. "Well, well, well.....if it isn't the witch's boyfriend." Xaldin mocked Roxas. Roxas gripped the pages of his manga tighter as he tried to ignore Xaldin's mocking voice. "Your girlfriend's been crying in her room for quite some time now, did you know?" Xaldin continued in the same mocking tone. Roxas put down the manga as casually as he could and asked," What happened?" Let's say her room went through a paper shredder, twice." Xaldin smiled evilly as he answered. Roxas was having a hard time from staving off the urge to draw out his keyblades and smashed them into the face of Xaldin. Xaldin continued mockingly," Are you still here? Why don't you go and check on your girlfriend. You know, let her cry on your shoulder or something."

That did it.

Roxas yelled," SHUT UP NOW!!!!" as he summoned his keyblades. Xaldin answered," MAKE ME!!!" as he summoned his lances. Roxas yelled back," FINE!!!!" as he charged at Xaldin. He rose the Oblivion and bought it down on Xaldin, but Xaldin blocked it with his lances. Roxas then leapt into the air and went into a flury of attacks. Xaldin blocked every single blow Roxas sent at him and started attacking. His spears sliced through the air dangerously. Roxas evaded the strikes and countered with a thurst with his Oathkeeper which Xaldin blocked easily. The two of them exchanged blows at unbelievable speed and strength, but Roxas was getting tired. The effort from using two keyblades was tiring him out quickly. He had to end this fight NOW. Dodging another blow, he rolled under the dining table. Xaldin's lances came down and smashed the table. "Okay....I didn't expect that to work.....time for a new strategy..." Roxas thought as he leapt away from another blow of Xaldin's lance. He thought quickly, and then moved. He leapt directly into the whirlwind surrounding Xaldin. Holding back all of Xaldin's lances with his keyblades, Roxas made his move. He let go of his keyblades and somersaulted over Xaldin. Summoning his keyblades, he striked a surprised Xaldin in the back. And at that moment, Xenmas came in.

He looked at the broken table, the cracks on the floor, and finally the two Organization members fighting, particularly the one with the keyblade. "ROXAS AND XALDIN!!!!!!! YOU GUYS ARE IN SO MUCH TROUBLE" Xenmas roared.

World that Never Was, Xenmas' room.

Xenmas' room looked more like an office than a room Roxas thought as he entered. Xenmas had just finished dealing with Xaldin and now it was his turn. Xenmas was looking at him furiously. "Do you remember rule number 1 in the Organization? Let me spell it out for you. A-N O-R-G-N-Z-T-I-O-N M-E-M-B-E-R C-A-N-N-O-T H-A-R-M A-N-O-T-H-E-R- M-E-M-B-E-R U-N-L-E-S-S O-R-D-E-R-E-D T-O. Commit it to memory will you?" Xenmas said in a strained voice. Roxas kept quiet. Xenmas continued,"This is not the first time you have been given a warning. Do you remeber your first one?"

FLASHBACK

World that Never Was, Library

Roxas was studying a spellbook, looking for a fire spell. He had found one, and was going to test it. He put the book on the table and got ready "Alright, this should be easy.....Roxas said as he held a keyblade up into the air. "FIRE!!!" Roxas commanded. But instead of a wall of fire appearing and surrounding him, a fire spewed out from the tip of his keyblade and burned the spellbook he had left on the table. The book burned and the fire spreaded to a nearby bookshelf. "Uh-oh..." Roxas said..........

FLASHBACK ENDS

Roxas winced at the memory. He had to save up 1000000 munny to repair the library. That had meant no manga for 3 months. "You still remember I see ." Xenmas said. Roxas looked up, slightly startled by Xenmas voice. His mind was still on the library disaster. "I'll be watching you Roxas. One more warning, adn you're out of the castle. Understand?" Xenmas said. Roxas nodded, not knowing what to say. "That is all, you may leave," Xenmas sighed as he spoke. Roxas left the room quickly, not knowing what Xenmas would do if he stayed and not wanting to find out.

World that Never Was, Hallway outside Xenmas' room

Roxas stood outside Xenmas' door. He sighed. What was he thinking, attacking Xaldin like that. He had to get a grip. Then his thoughts went to Namine. "She must still be crying over her pictures," he thought. Maybe I should go see her. HE sighed again, and opened a Corridor of Darkness. Looking back at Xenmas' door, he entered..........

For those who don't know what Xenmas said about rule number 1, it's "An organization member cannot harm another member unless ordered to."
Chapter 7 should be out soon..........Feel free to comment on this story.

P/S I was wrong about Xaldin getting hurt really badly. Sorry!!!

 

Even though Naminé has probably seen all of Twilight Town, I think they should go to the Clock Tower because you get a nice view of the whole town. Destiny Islands would be romantic, but Twilight Town just seems to...match both of them a bit better.

 

Each line of dialogue should be placed on a separate line if it's being spoken by someone else.

Also, you're not allowed to put polls in Creativity Corner threads anymore. This rule was implemented since yesterday. Please read the stickies.

 

Yea, I just think that the clock tower is better. I just don't know why I put destiny islands there......:P

Oh, thanks for the advice. Sorry about that (the poll). I have the habit of ignoring stickies :D

 

hey

i dont know how late i am butif i were him i would take her to sunset terrace