Riku's Girl

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Who do you think riku's girl is??

  1. a new character?

    89 vote(s)
    57.4%
  2. Yuffie?

    8 vote(s)
    5.2%
  3. Aerith?

    6 vote(s)
    3.9%
  4. Selphie?

    14 vote(s)
    9.0%
  5. tifa?

    9 vote(s)
    5.8%
  6. A GUY?? (jk or is it?)

    29 vote(s)
    18.7%
  1. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    here the next page people!! sorry it took a while.


    Chapter 9

    Riku and the girl then walked to the nearby coffee shop.

    "Well we really haven't been formally introduced.Hi,I'm Riku."

    "I'm Audrey,"She said cooly.

    "That's a very pretty name."Riku said

    "Thank you."

    Sora and Kairi then caught up to them.They were watching from a bush."Come on we got to get closer."Kairi said.

    "You know what i just realized Kairi?"Sora said.

    "What?"

    "THAT YOU HAVE GONE BONKERS!"Sora yelled.

    Kairi ignored the rude comment and pulled stuff outta of her purse.

    "Here put this on,"She told Sora.She handed him a tan coat and a fake mustache with glasses.

    "Are you serious? Do you really keep this stuff in your purse?"

    "Well I do a lot of spying."Kairi replied. Sora sighed and rolled his eyes.

    "Hurry up!"Kairi yelled.

    "I'm hurrying!" Once Sora was done they moved a few tabled away.

    "Please explain this to me again,"Sora whispered to Kairi.

    "Okay what we are doing is spying.I'm trying to hear what they are saying so shut up!"

    Riku and Audrey were really hitting it off.

    "So what do you do?"Audrey asked Riku.

    "Well mainly I'm a keyblade weilder.But on the side I'm a photographer."

    "Wow. Do you get to travel a lot?"Audrey questioned.

    "Well I've been to many worlds."Riku replied.

    "Where have you gone?"

    "Way to many to count really."

    "Well that must be must be great!"

    "Yeah it really is.So do you get to travel a lot?"Riku asked.

    "No I don't.I'm just the editor for the local newspaper."

    "Well that might be a little exciting?"

    "Not really."

    They both laughed.

    Then out of the great blue sea she asked, "Are you seeing anyone?"

    Riku had no idea what to say."Well I had actually a triple date with my two friends and their girlfriends.But she hasn't called me back so i guess not."

    "You wanna go out on Friday?" she asked.

    "Sure."

    "Call me,"She handed Riku a card.

    "I have to get going.See you on Friday."

    "Great. Bye."

    "Bye,"She walked away.

    "Okay guys you can come out now," Riku said aloud.

    "How did you know?"Kairi asked.

    "Trust me.You guys aren't exactly 007."

    Fin! for now.......

    now guys i need some help I really don't know what to put for the next chapters so give me any idea you got! thanks!
     
  2. RRMS Gummi Ship Junkie

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    how about Larxene finds out, tries to do some sort of revenge on Riku, fails and Audrey and Riku get married!
    Lol, J/k'z
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    But you can use ideas...
    xDDDD
    Lawl...I <3 this story!
     
  3. stripy4 Traverse Town Homebody

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    I love this chapter! Kairi carries fake moustaches in her purse?? O.o
     
  4. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    yup

    thanks that gives me an idea!

    yup she does a lot of spying i guess........
     
  5. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    so sos sosososososo sorry you guys!! way to much homework lately!!(and reading to much manga) *Cough*

    Chapter 9

    ~Friday~

    This one wasn't a triple date this time. Riku and Audrey went to a nice quiet dinner. They talked and talked for at least two hours. Finally at 10:00 pm they decided to call it a night. He drove her home and she gave him a nice kiss on the cheek.

    "I'll be sure to call you," She said.

    "I"ll see ya later then,"Riku said back.

    Riku got into his car and called Roxas. "Hey man what's up!?" Riku really needed to talk someone to talk to about his night. So he was desperate.....

    "This isn't the a good time man," Riku then heard the mmmm sounds of Namine.

    "Oh. I hear.I'll call you back later then,"Riku hung up and called Sora.

    "Hey dude what you up to?"Riku said.

    "Dude totally not the right time,"Riku then heard mmmm sounds of Kairi.Riku quietly hung up.

    "WHY IS EVERYONE GETTING SOME BUT ME!!" He then drove off to his apartment. There was a note on the door it said:
    Hey! It's Larxene. I dropped by but you weren't home so call me. 643-9377 thanks! ^^

    Riku stared at the note.He sighed.Once he got inside he called her. She didn't answer so he left a message. He took off his shirt, (has a nosebleed) took off his pants (more nosebleed) and put on his p-j's and went to bed.

    the next one will be out soon i swear to it!
     
  6. stripy4 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Poor Riku... He'll get dizzy from lack of blood soon, XD Uh-oh, Larxene is back on the equation... *Insert Dramatic music here*
    Riku is dead meat.
     
  7. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    I'm sooo sorry guys!!!! big project i have to work on!!! but it's here!!

    ~Next Morning~

    Riku awoke to a knock on his door. He looked at his clock, 7:30 "Ugh...."Riku got up and opened the door and there stood Sora and Roxas in their work out clothes.

    "Come on dude get dressed!"Sora and Roxas walked in.

    "Yes please come in," Riku said. He closed the door. "So why did you guys come down here?"


    "We were going to workout and we came over to see if you wanna come. So you wanna come?"Roxas said.


    "Yeah sure hold on a second." Riku put on a shirt and his shorts. They drove to the gym.

    "So what happened last night?" Sora asked Riku.

    "What are you talking about?" Roxas said.

    "Oh yeah I forgot you weren't there," Sora explained to Roxas what happened.

    "Oh. So what happened."

    "Well it was a good date. But when I got home I found a note from Larxene saying she came by when i wasn't home.But what i wanna know is how and the hell did she find out where I live!"

    "Maybe she looked you up......,"Roxas said quietly.

    "You called her didn't you?" Riku said.

    "Ummm........maybe.......,"Roxas said, "But only to say hi and when she was going to call you...."

    "Why would you do something like that you idiot!!!" Riku yelled.

    "Well you weren't doing anything so I thought i would......"

    "Okay but don't do that ever ever again!!! Or i will kill!!" Riku yelled. "So what happened with you guys? O wait I already know!!!" Riku said sarcasticly.

    'Yeah sorry about that but man....,"Sora said,"It was Friday that's when couples you know...."

    "Man I really wish i had a girlfriend" Riku said.

    "Well you have two chances now." Roxas said.

    A phone rand and it was Sora's. "Hello? You're what?!?!?!"
     
  8. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    i'll right everyone i finished my stupid science project!!!! so that means i actually get to post!!
    okay everyone please don't kill me i'm back for sure now

    chapter 11

    "Dude! Turn around now!!!" Sora yelled at Riku.

    "Dude what's wrong?" Riku asked.

    "I'll tell you later just drop me off at my apartment quick!"

    "Okay okay!"

    ~ 5 minutes later~
    They dropped off Sora and he ran in.

    "I wonder what that was about....," Riku said aloud.

    "I have no idea and I'm not sure i wanna know......," Roxas said. "Well you still wanna go to the gym?"

    "Nah, I think I'm going to have breakfast with Larxene," Riku answered.

    "Oh okay just drop me off at home then."

    ~10 minutes later~

    "See ya later!!" Riku called out.

    'See ya!" Roxas yelled back.

    Riku then went home. He dropped his keys on his desk. He saw Larxene's number on his kitchen counter top. He got his phone and dialed the number.

    "Hello?" Larxene picked up.

    "Hi, Larxene it's Riku," he was getting nervous his palms were sweating.

    "Oh hi Riku what's up?" she answered.

    "Nothing much do you wanna have breakfast with me?" Riku asked while squinting his eyes waiting for an answer.

    "Sure! where at?" she said.

    "Umm...... how bout' ihop? I'll come pick you up in about 20 minutes." Riku answered.

    "Sounds like a plan. See ya then." she said.

    "See ya." Riku hung up. "Wow that was easier than expected." Riku some on some clean jean and a clean shirt. He didn't want to look like he was trying to hard. Yet he didn't want to look like he didn't care. He sighed, "This dating **** is hard!" He grabbed his keys and went to pick up Larxene. When he saw Larxene outside he was shocked. She wore a dress a little passed her knees. Her hair wasn't in the eye-popping sort-of way (lolz). the dress she wore was a nice summer dress with different flowers on it. Riku figures that Marly made it for her. Her hair was down and wavy.
    Riku went around and opened her door. He got back in. "Wow you look.............wow."

    "Why thank you,'' she said. Went they got a table it was a window booth. Riku ordered pancakes with blue berries and rassberries, with bacon and hashbrowns. Larxene ordered the same with extra rasberries and some syrup. After ten minutes of just some chit chat. the food finally came.

    "So how was your date with Audrey?" Riku choked on his pancakes a little. He drank some of his orange juice. "Ummmm.........well," Riku hesitated. What was he suposed to say? "First may I ask how you know?"

    "Let's just say a little birdie told me....." Larxene said. Riku thought to himself who would do that to him?
    Larxene snapped him out of his thoughts. "So how was it? Did you sleep with her?" Riku choked again but this time on his hashbrowns. He drank more of his orange juice.

    "No I didn't sleep with her. You know I wouldn't do that."

    "I just wanted to let you know that i'm seeing someone else too," Larxene said. Riku then again choked but this time on his bacon.

    Larxene giggled, "Wow you choke a lot."

    Riku drank more of his orange juice. "Well i have moment in my life where it just kinda happens." Riku said. Larxene giggled again. Riku laughed too.

    "You done?" Larxene asked.

    "Yup," Riku said.

    "Good i wanna show you something." Larxene said.
     
  9. stripy4 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Wow! Riku does choke a lot... I wonder who ratted on him... I'm betting Roxas. However, Kairi and Namine are pretty devious... Can't wait for more! Stupid Science projects!
     
  10. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    yes duhh duhh duhh

    but you have to remember that Roxas didn't know till that morning but you'll see. I actually thought it was kinda obivous who did it but okay i should shut up now.......
     
  11. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    i sure will!

    hi!! (again)

    okay people!! the next chapter is out!!!

    ~Chapter 12~

    Larxene go tin the driver seat of Riku's caar.

    "So where are we going?" Riku asked.

    "You'll see soon enough." Soon after she drove into a parking lot.

    "What is this place?" Riku asked again.

    "You ask too many questions!" she grabbed his hand and ran, "Come on you slow poke!" Riku then saw that they were at a park.

    Why did you bring me here?! he thought to himself. Then he saw a lake.

    "One please." Larxene told a man in a booth. She then handed him a 5 dollar bill. Larxene then shoved Riku into a gaint swan.

    'What is this?" Riku asked.

    "You haven't done this before?" Larxene said.

    "Well.....no."

    "Okay all what you do is pedal like bike."

    "Like this?" Riku started pedaling.

    "Yeah exactly." They spent a least 1 hour just going around this huge lake. They were talking non-stop, and laughing. When they brought it back they were still laughing. It was about mid day so it was kinda hot. Riku then saw a ice cream booth. He grabbed Larxene's hand and sprinted to it. But Larxene wasn't paying attention and tripped on a big rock and fell right on top of Riku. (XP) They were locked eyes for what seemed ages. Then Riku finally kissed her. They were kissing for ages. Finally they came up for breath. Larxene sat down on the grass. Riku was still on the ground shocked at what a good kiss that was.

    "Wow...." He finally said.He then sat up. "I have to say that was the b-" Riku was interrupted by getting glomped on to and kissed. Larxene got off.

    "Do you umm......wanna go to my place?" She asked.Riku thought about the answer. He knew what this would mean.

    "Sure."

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    soo sorry it's a really short chapter!! So please forgive me but i wanna add some suspense.
     
  12. stripy4 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Oooh! *Intreged* The plot thickens... This cheered me up! (Guess who's got a cold...)
    Can't wait for more! :)
     
  13. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    thanks i think you be very surprised what happens......... ps: sorry you have a cold!!

    okay the thing with fan-fic's is that it's different than the real story line. It just has the same people and their same personalities. But i just thought that since Roxas is with Namine and Sora is with Kairi then who's Riku's girl? I know it can kinda get confusing but sometimes that's how fan-fics are. Thanks for commenting!
     
  14. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    okay ya'll i think I got it this time.
    please this has some 'weird' scenes so please don't kill me this you don't like it please don't read or comment if you feel uncomfortable thanks!!

    ~Chapter 13~ (i think....)

    "Okay come on!" Riku was getting some really weird chills down his spine. This was it, he knew what was coming. He just hopped that he wouldn't make himself look too stupid. When he felt getting pulled brought him out of his thoughts. Soon they got the parking lot. Larxene got in the driving seat and Riku in the passenger seat. She ran up the stairs up to her apartment door. She paused at the door. He Riku didn't know why. She then got out her keys and quickly opened the door. She then grabbed Riku's hand and walked into her bedroom. She then slipped out of her dress and then pinned Riku on the bed. She took off his shirt. She took a few seconds to look at the very muscular Riku. Then she snapped out of it and locked lips with him.
    Riku now felt incredibly awkward about this. He then felt hands going down his sides and in the front on his pants. He gave a small grunt in protest. Larxene smiled at his protest then un-bottoned his pants and then
    un-ziped his pants and then slide them off. Riku went a light shade of red. He then felt her on the band on his boxers. His eyes grew the size of plates then pushed her off

    "I'm sorry larxene......" Riku sighed.

    "It's okay Riku," she said, "Now where were we?" Sliding her hand across he's chest, and locking lips with him. He pushed her off again.

    "Larxene...............i can't," Larxene was very puzzled now."I mean we've okay gone on two dates and we're already doing it...... it just doesn't feel right."

    There was a long moment of silence. Until Larxene broke it. "Are you........ breaking up with me?"

    "No of course not! It's just i don't feel comfortable doing it yet....."Riku said. Larxene wasn't as tensed now.

    "So if you don't wanna do that then what do you wanna do?"

    "I don't know you have any ideas?" Riku said.

    "Well i do have DDR..." (XD)

    "Oh really?"

    "Really really....."

    "I beat i can kick your butt!" Riku said.

    "Oh really bring it!" Larxene said while following Riku into the front room.

    "This will be very interesting playing DDR in our underwear....."Riku commented.

    "Yes it will," She then kissed Riku deeply. She then pulled away, "I can't wait till I see your face when i kick your butt........"

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    A couple of hours later~

    Riku and Larxene collapsed on the couch hot and sweaty.

    Larxene then turned to Riku, "Hey you wanna take a shower...."

    TO BE CONTINUED......... ehhee!!

    okay i'm sorry i needed at least on chapter with DDR in it. i couldn't help myself. i hope it gives you some more suspense!!! *does evil laugh* XD
     
  15. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    okay okay i stupidly left me notebook in locker at school but i know you guys what more so this we be from memory okay dokies?!?!

    Chapie 14

    "Ummm i actually think I'm going to take off," Riku said.

    "Alright then." She headed into her bedroom and found Riku clothes all over the floor. She laughed at then then picked them up. She thew the clothes at Riku. "Here! Get outta here!" She said in a sarcastic voice.
    He quickly dressed then kissed Larxene tenderly.

    "I'll see you later okay?"

    "k..." She said in return. Riku then slipped out of the door.

    (I'm going to do some Larxene PoV)( for those who doesn't know what that means it point of view)( i actually didn't know that till a couple days ago)(I've been reading alot of stories on the internet lately)(anyways back to the story!!)

    Larxene then went to check up on her myspace page. Nothing new as she checked it. Same old same old....
    She then checked her comments as she saw one from demyx. "Hmmm.....weird i didn't know he had a myspace." She checked out his myspace. It was really cool actually. He did have a bunch of pics from the organization which was lame. His background was of water which Larxene chuckled at that. She then decided to get off. She then decided she needed a ice cream cone. Grabbing her keys and coat her was off. The ice cream parlor wasn't far away so she decided to walk. When she go there she ordered a Rocky Road ice cream cone. That had always been her favorite. She sat down and began to lick at her ice cream.
    She then turned her head to see Riku walk in. She was about to say hi but then she saw that a girl was with him. She grabbed a menu fast and put in front of herself. They headed to the counter to order ice cream she took this chance to run out. She quickly put the menu down and ran out. She didn't think Riku see her but she wasn't sure. She then walked back to her house. She then decided to check her email. She saw that it was the typical stuff she usually had.
    she found one from Axel: Hey larxene!! wanna go out some time? ;)
    She then found one from Roxas: Axel keeps beating me out don't go out with him!
    Another from Axel: I don't beat him up!
    another from Roxas: Yes he does!!
    another from Axel: NO I DON'T YOU LIAR!!
    This went back and forth and she deleted all of them.
    she then found one from Demyx: Hey check out my myspace!!
    He scrolled down and found one from Xemnas she was a little scared to open it. She finally did.
    Larxene we need to talk
     
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    The Roxas/Axel text argument made me laugh! "Check out my MySpace!!!" :laughing-smiley-004:roll:
    Oh, nice chapter! AND A CLIFFHANGER!!! *Faints* YAY FOR CLIFFHANGERS!!!!
     
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    The Roxas and Axel part made me lol. and for now, DUN DUN DUUUUUN!! ^^ Keep it coming.
     
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    A comic relief

    Axel sort of does Beat Roxas up. I mean Roxas totally wupped Red-head's butt in KH2, but still, Axel and Roxas are always seen dong pranks in KH comics. And in other art, they're doing something else, but I won't go into that because Already one Organization member has made out in this. >_<

    I am now off to your friends house to hold him/her hostage. My Demands? Tell me who Riku walked into The ice cream shop with! And rocky Road Ice cream too. It's my favorit and you writing it gave me the munchies! LOL
     
  19. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    ya i wanted a cliffhanger for you people to ponder at

    whoo!! this is the 100th post!! yes i will keep them coming

    lol true dat! but my friend will probably bite you head off before you do anything to her! XD just be patient it will come......all in due time.......
     
  20. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    okay i had my notebook!!! yay!!!

    okay next chapie 15!

    Larxene slunk into her chair. "Oh my God!! How does he know!!" she yelled. She did know how to answer back. She then sighed and answered back as she usually does. So what do you wanna talk about?
    He answered back but this time in a IM. You know what i'm talking about
    Larxene: I have no idea what your talking about
    Xenmas:Don't be a smart ass!
    Larxene: I still don't have any idea what your talking about
    Xenmas: I know who your going out with
    Larxene didn't know what to say. What would Xenmas do to her!
    Larxene: who am i going out with Xemy?
    Xenmas: Axel
    She fell back in her chair laughing. She decided she would have some fun with this.
    Larxene: Yeah we're totally going out
    Xenmas: Well that's actually a relief it explains all the weird nosies coming from his bedroom at night.
    Larxene: Ummm.... yeah sure.....
    Xenmas: But Roxas is never in his bedroom i wonder where he goes....
    Larxene didn't say anything till a little while. Well i g2g Mansex see ya!
    She didn't stick around to see the reaction.She turned off her computer. She felt a little sad about seeing Riku with another girl but didn't think that much about it. She sat on the couch wondering what she should do. She had lied to Riku about seeing someone else. Back there she thought she could make him jealous. She thiught about it. Maybe she really should find someone to make him jealous. She got a evil idea. She quickly grabbed to phone and dialed a few numbers.
    "Hello?"
    "Hi it's Larxene!"
    "What a surprise.."
    "Listen I need a favor........"
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    just a note people tomorrow might be the last chapter for a awhile cuz i'm going on a vacation. So i might have the next chapter up tomorrow or not. soooo sorry people!