Apart from the AX that is kinda hard to see this is another great tag Axel, I think it would have been better if you made the text a little darker so people can see it better 8/10
Hmm...not really meant to be seen. More like a swift in the background, that's half meant to be seen. In a way it was kinda an error. For that matter I bet you din see the 7. He is the new version w/o that. Edit: sry for db, thought someone had answered be4.
For the record v2 has no text. Fixed up a bit lighting, color, a bit depth (I need help on that though) and again, no text.
Serious contrast issue on this one. xD Lower the brightness and add some flow/depth. Otherwise it's good.