Rhyme battle KHV

Tame explains a bit. Basically, we are going to rhyme and rap and rhythm some post out. All you have to do is take an element or two from the top poster and make it your own.
Rules:
No flame wars or overuse of cursing in your raps please. If you use a translate for your words (like Gizoogle Translate) please put the link in your post after your rhyme. And if you don't know how to type in English, just do the best you can.
Inspired by Odamadillo
First rhythm to spew forth is part of this magnificent sport. There rhymes will blind your mind with plenty of time to let us dine on your well cooked eyes, but you won't mind once you are melted in the brain with no train of thought because this thread be rocking like roll and toll that that old troll put up in the middle of that old dusty road.
Go go go, oh oh,
my children of music now,
Go go go, oh oh.

 

The blinding rhyme above I see
For though you may be testing me,
I see no reason for my brain to melt,
As you, yourself, have surely felt
That train run over your heart and mind
But a rolling troll is hard to find.

 

Ah, you saw through my facade, but like a long magic wand there is more to my stick.
I have more rhythm and rhyme than that toy train. So much more I can ignore the pain.
I will send it right back like a whack of a bat

 

If you feel pain
From a toy train,
You have more problems
Than a melted brain.

 

Never said I did, never said I would
That plank of wood in your back is going to soon be soot.
Because soon I will light you on fire with words and rhythm.
Like a tremor of word flavor cooked in a hot pot with food that never rots.
I pull the pan off, and stick you in the fire.

 

And although I would perspire,
I would indeed survive the fire.
For rhyme is a battle of words and wit
And I shall be a part of it.
The problem here is that there are
Only two of us so far.
This battle should be more fun, I'd say
If more people would join in the fray.

 

I agree, and as you see, burnitup might become our number three.

 

If he is, hurrah!, I say
Let's see if he just runs away.

 

C'mon burnitup, here's my challenge: Be the major rap master. Beat me and Zelda out and we won't cry out in pain but in joy because you're an excellent toy to play a game of rhythm with so don't switch yourself off, turn yourself on and be ready for on big bomb

 

If it was a test then you best guest what's next for that will help your proceed with this quest
Wanna take a drive on the side which you thought would open eyes hoping to forget
People saying you'll never exceed anyone's expectation with fake hate and frustration
Screw dedication just more obliteration to a corrupt nation
Then you face em, take em, erase em, break em, kill and penetrate em
Rise the stakes to see if the sour puss has what it takes
More like instigate and wait for their heart stop with the common hesitate
Feels great when you know someone is unable to evaluate the race in the current place
Pace yourself because in good time maybe you'll appreciate the ability to understand the Art Of Rhyme

 

This is beautiful, but made of sour blood and the tears of departed and we're gonna start it up. Slashing smashing tearing and barrelin' through and that the truth of you, but your art is bloody and black with a lack of pure shine that only the bleach of white words can clean and ream the leftovers of your eyes as you try and break through this labyrinth I weave, as you see these words here are beautiful and true as I am to you, and you to me.

 

Beautiful, yes, it is indeed
And you have filled our rhyming need.
A bit violent, but that's no matter, for
It was good, and that's what we look for.
Although I used a word twice to rhyme,
I don't really care, the words are mine.
We now have our number three.
You typed your words magnificently.

 

Yes, but our number two got sniped by me, the number one for one another we will make beautiful words, us original three as it is our destiny.

 

I thank you both for the kinds words of praise
Since its us three does this mean we have bars for days?
Could it be the beauty in these words make them absurd in nature?
Naw I just need to lighten up to makes these words flash like a blurr
I'm the magnificent, black militant, rap villain, my crafts Diligent, so these cats mimic it
I wanted to thank these young emcees for allowing to spit this

 

A nice rap, but I will come back to bite back your words turning light and bright with a grey tone that is not all alone. All the pain and all the days I saw you walk around to dead ends just to come back black and red but never blue as it was true you always spoke with a lighting fast blur, but the words said never were always well liked so they tried to smite this artist for speaking truth when all they can spray is lies.
Edit: I hate typo's, and I made a big one.

 

A bite in the light will surely smite those from the dark as they came from the ark. Lightning true is always blue but fast as it is blue fades the quickest.
The problem, you see,
Is rap's not for me,
For when I try to read,
I feel my eyes sting.
But from what I can tell,
Your both doing swell,
And now I must go,
So on with the show..

 

They sprayed these lies in the public eyes
When it comes time to tell the truth they ask where and why
You can't find the place if the lies take the place as mace so we chase the greats to debate on how to hate
Love is there to those that have the means to care
It would have been more, but since they're blinded it causes them to have a glare
Leavin these cats askin huh is that called truth over there?
I walk past to my clique fast, but have to dash for many others stare
Could it be cause the skin color?
I'm black so someone white wants to say ni- thinking were brothers
Not the way I was raised
I walk away leavin their brains blazed
Confused for the truth is infused with those that lack that wisdom tooth
Now leave it to Star and Zelda to make a fuss in this booth

 

Oh, please don't go, unless it is as you may know only temporary for the real and ready Rap Battle has only started and I want to see our best, and to see you address yourself as the best[DOUBLEPOST=1357781770][/DOUBLEPOST]

A sweet movement, for a snipe, but that is not too bright because sniping me brings me back with a large newspaper to whack you over the head with for my bet is this isn't over ever forever and always never.

 

Now since I spoke they wanted my approach a little different
That won't last so long since you said there's a top spot so I've come and get it
Its hard to be a rapper if you can't full fill the descriptions
People say we're the targets until I make them the victims
Zelda just don't go for you have some slick and smooth flow
To leave would cause that talent to bleed on someone who isn't capable
If this is a Rap Battle I hope we can aim
For those to claim to run anything
Without proper precautions taken when they see all us
If you want 3 then end up with 2 how can you do what you feel is true if there's no fuss

 

Good questions, but I have a few, like am I the incompetent fool who has no skill? Because that would make me feel like trash, like the unwanted rash for this brash comment made of barbs and thorns worn down with time and unliked rhythms?.