Revelations (Re-made)

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  1. Feenie Finny, Fin of the Feenie Fish

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    "We were discussing how cute these costumes are!" Maddie smiled, pointing to the costume Harley was holding.

    Cory smiled, "It seems you've found your 'inner fire' " He grinned and made the black hole disappear. "Look at your hand!"

    Rita noticed benches and lockers in the pool, "I'll be right back..." She said as she ran over and jumped into the pool, transforming into an octopus as she collided with the water.
     
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    He jerked backward,shaking his hand,breathing hard

    "Oh right!"
     
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    "Hehehe, It won't burn you...it's your power after all!"

    "You gonna wear that one?"
     
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    "I dont have any....Im normal....Im normal..."

    "Um...Yeah.."she smiled
     
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    "It's evident that you aren't normal!"

    "I think I'll wear this one!" She held up a costume with a wing design on it.
     
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    "No one asked you.."

    "Its pretty..."
     
  7. Feenie Finny, Fin of the Feenie Fish

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    "I don't see anyone else, who else are you gonna ask?"

    "I know! Same with yours! I'm going to go get it on now" She prodded off into a changing booth then came out a minute later with the costume on.
     
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    "Nobody..."

    "Oooh.Nice..."she said going to get changed
     
  9. Feenie Finny, Fin of the Feenie Fish

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    "Then don't TALK TO YOURSELF!"
     
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    "No one said you had to listen..."
     
  11. Feenie Finny, Fin of the Feenie Fish

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    "Kinda hard to not listen to you when I have an attention percentage of 150! meaning I can to listen to every single word anyone says! No matter how clearly they say it!""
     
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    He muttered something along the lines of "sure you can d*ckwad.."both dissappereing into a booth to change

    Harley came back out,in her bikini
     
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    "Don't 'sure you can d*ckwad..' ME!!"

    "Wow, that looks really good on you!"
     
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    "Thanks yours does too"she smiled "coming?"she asked heading towards the door


    "Or what?"
     
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    He snapped his fingers and a window to the girls locker room opened, it zoomed in on Harley. "Girlie goes bye bye!" A black hole appeared infront of Harley as he said that.

    "Look out!" Maddie screamed as the black hole appeared in front of Harley.
     
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    "What the-!"

    "I wouldnt do that if I were you..."
     
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    "Why? what could a normal person like you do to a freak like me?!" He increased the size of the black hole.
     
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    "I really wouldnt.."
     
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    The black hole increased in size even more, drawing more things in.
     
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    "Enough!" he snapped,flames licking his hands again
     
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