“I can’t see myself…†“I’m alone this time…†“I thought it was over… “You thought so too…†“There’s nothing left of him…†“Or is there…†“Black doesn’t show up on black…†“White doesn’t show up on white…†“It must be dark here…†“That place was light…†“Even when I saw it then…†“It made no sense…†“I am what’s left…†“No…†“How then…†“If I do not exist…†“If he does not exist…†“Then…†“The door is bright…†“I’ll be seen there…†“Do I want that…†“Or not…†“Wait…†“I think…†“Therefore…†“I am…†“He said that…†“You know don’t you…†“About the key…†“That will open the door…†“No…†“That’s not it…†“Who are you…†“Are you me…†“No…†“You’re not him either…†“Neither am I…†“So…†“He’s the one…†“Am I right…†“I could be…†“His way…†“He killed them…†“Was that so wrong…†“No…†“Is that so wrong…†“It wasn’t once…†“It wasn’t twice…†“Were they so wrong…†“I know…†“That’s where I have to go…†“But can I…†“Will it work….†“Itârk…†“Who knows…†“Maybe this is the start of a new journey…†“In itself…†“It’s enough to just believe…†“I believe…†“Do you…†I just kinda wrote this while I was having and still am having brain blocks on everything else. The original font made it look nicer. It made it look kinda like a fading Nobody when flipped on it's side... Oh well, can't have everything go your way. This may be foreshadowing, depending on whether I wanna do something with it or not. Well, that's about it.
It's cool I think you were trying to make it hard to read (black on gray) because if you weren't trying, then it was hard to read, if you were trying good job. I had to read it three times before I kind of sort of understood it though, but that is sometimes good. But it sounds fun to read!
I made it black 'cause I felt like it, actually. I'm glad you liked it. (See the gladness in my typing?) Although I think it's good it's hard to read makes a point. Like in that one part I can't quote. Yeah...
Dark... shuspenshful... I like it.... =3 Is it poetry? It kinda seems like it... Just with a unique style thrown in.
Well. It is a poem... I don't write poems often. I can't make rhymes or rhythm so this is my own style... I guess.
Heh... Me, too. XD; Rhyming isn't too hard for me, BUT I feel like what ever I make is too.. cliche, I guess. But whithout ryming I can't make rhythm. So, most of the time I just decide, "Ah, screw it! >.<;" and trash every poem I make. XD; I can always HIRE people to make poems for me, RIIIIGHT? XDDDDD;
