FINE YOU CAUGHT ME... I cannot be torn away from this place because I love you freaks so much. >> Ehh I just want to reach prem.. then leave.. so you still got a good year from me. ANYWAYS SORRY ABOUT THE SPAM I have a poem that I wrote for my english class Remember me? I remember this girl, Stunning blue eyes And charcoal black hair. She had a perfect life, Perfect family Perfect friends She was only five years old. She was always smiling, Always was polite. Always waved hello To her neighbors and friends She was smart She was pretty. She was only eight years old. One day her perfect life Was shattered by a bullet All she remembers was the red and white sirens On the ambulance And the stretcher that was covered with an orange blanket The only body part she saw was A hand with a beautiful diamond ring on it The person she had loved was now gone Her heart shattered to pieces She was only eleven years old Couple years have past Since that tragic accident Her father was still with her But focuses more attention to his work She was all alone No one to talk to She rather be alone She was only fifteen years old She started skipping meals Skipping classes She got thinner and thinner everyday People were worried People were scared What happened to that sweet little girl That always knew what to say Ever since that day Her life stopped in its tracks That little girl once before Is now a young adult Having trouble going through life Not being able to move on She suffered She feared She was only nineteen years old Things started to get better She met a young man A sweet caring lovely man Slowly her heart was being put Back together again That lovely smile she once had Was now back on her face She loved him and he loved her They had a beautiful wedding And had two children My name is Madeline This is my story This is who I was This is who I am now This is my life
AH! Sabby thats beautiful!! Great Job. My poems were crap xD I typed them up in 10 minutes. This is truely great! Amazing Job :D
I like it. I can't wait to see more. Of course I like something that would have no happy ending but I liked it :) Great job!
very deep and sincere, I especially like the metaphor uses. My only comment is that the line: "Always was pretty" Always and was don't seem like they mesh..but could just be me. Glad you see you back and hope to read more soon!!
