I stop and stare At myself in the mirror I look at my empty eyes They show fear and solitude I wipe away my tear I stand here alone Staring at this person Its me but I don't know Who this is The one right there Im so confused I act,lie, and pretend Pretending to be someone I don't want to be a nobody A person that doesn't exist But now I wish I never lied My life was wasted On something that turned to pain I hate this reflection The person I see... The lies that covered the truth The real person underneath All those acts My mind is suffering All I want now Is to be me The person that you fell in love with Let me be free And to unlock the truth Something I made from boredom
*claps* wonderful... just... wonderful... :D I love it! It all flows so well together when I read it out loud... and it just soothes my heart... <3 I luv it! great job! XD
I really like this poem, it shows great emotion and I believe with more work, it would be a great poem =]
Wow. This poem truly touched me. Great job with it. It expresses me in a way as well. Way to connect with the readers. -Kairi
Thank you again. Yes i try to touch reader's feeling like that.Like when people r sad i wish to help them express it and let their feelings flow and emotion. ^^
