Traditional Art Re: Conceptualizing

So here's a less rough draft of what I'm trying to get at with the sketch.



I'm going to say right now I got lazy and could not do everything I wanted to, because some of that is surprisingly hard. Well, you might know what I would say so I'll not say it instead.

 

This is a definite improvment. I think you should change her top though. It clashes with the rest of her outfit.

 

True. I did it first and didn't bother to edit myself.

 

This is alot better. I like how you changed the clothes like youi said. Much better!

 

There we go. now the lines are better and matches how she is tied around it. ^^ Now it's the outfit like the others above mentioned.