Rayku's Poetry Corner...

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Rayku, Jul 31, 2009.

  1. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Breathe

    Hands and feet are intertwined; we care for one another so much.
    Words cannot express how I love you, pure bliss and enjoyment run through my brain each time I see you. My mouth cannot form words, bound by the restraints of my tongue and mute expressions. Heartbeats sped up as soon I see you laying there. Wounded by the sickness of love, frozen till the breath of life breathes into your lungs, my life shall enter your heart. So you can continue on after me…jumping in the sunshine.


    Hope you like it guys <3 Cnc also.
     
  2. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Aw, this is so heart warming.

    It really has some feeling in it, gave me a sorta visual, of a sunset for some reason.

    o.o
     
  3. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks Skittles :3

    I think this might be my best poem
     
  4. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Going down the winding roads, Lost for words, Unable to find you.
    Turning, Turning, Turning…Going in circles just to see you. Roads leading into dead ends.
    Day becomes night, and night becomes day. Stars seem to keep me alive for the sight. Can I continue on without you without turning to the soft glow of your face in the morning? My soul may leave but my body shall start anew for another day, another dream, another story. Awaking in the water…grasping for air. But an outstretched hand fell into the abyss. To abandon me forever in the void of everlasting dreams for the forsaken, Finding your shadows in the nightmares of the dammed. Lost forever without your warmth, the touch of the soft skin your hands weaved nightmares and dreamscapes, for I am stuck inside of one of your creations.
     
  5. Nuff' Said Banned

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    You are quite a poet. I like what form you put it in. You put a great deal of detail which gavce it a good feeling.
     
  6. Styx That's me inside your head.

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    Glad to see you've made a poetry corner too. I liked this appetizer, it was very grim but it was somehow touching as well. The ending in particular had beauty within the gloomy tones of the poem. I'll read more when you update your thread.
     
  7. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Divine Justice (also to be entered into the contest)


    Justice is told to us to be our savior, to protect us forever until we die.

    But she shall one day fall to its knees and beg for our mercy.

    For we have abused and tarnished lady justice, because she was our only scapegoat.

    Can we ever find another escape, another rag doll to play with?
    Another one destroy… little by little, piece by piece?

    Because Justice is flawed, just like the people who made it, the people who live by it, and the people who are protected by our divine justice.
     
  8. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Never said


    I never said that I loved you, because you just wanted to use me.

    I never said yes to throw me on that bed and abuse me.

    I never said okay for you to kiss me, to lick me, or to punch me.

    I never said for you to hold me down and smother me while I yelp and cry.

    But I did say yes for that whisper in my ear,

    the only thing I truly enjoyed from you.
     
  9. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Feverish

    I lay my head on the pillow and close my eyes to sleep
    I feel the weight of you pressing down on the bed, and my eyes open in a flutter
    Your hair, as bright as golden rays of the sunshine, which dance inside my mind
    Brown eyes, which stare into my soul and find every secret and tombs that have been lost in the sands of time
    Your ruby red lips feverishly make me to do more than touch you…

    Soft touches from your hands makes my body go numb and freeze me in a bind for you to use me…
    Your laugh makes my heart fill with joy...
    Until I reach to kiss you, ready to receive more
    I wake up from my dream and cry knowing you will never be at my bedside anymore.