Random (Yes, Random is the title of the poem)

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  1. Noroz I Wish Happiness Always Be With You

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    Wrote it for thet Poetry slam in my Poetry & Drama class.
    Read, hopefully enjoy, and critics?

    Its morning
    it’s my favorite day
    I look at the clock, Seven A.M
    I’ll freshen up
    Go downstairs
    Gotta have my bowl
    Where’s the cereal?

    Screw it, gotta go
    My friends pick me up
    I’ll be sittin’ in the back seat
    While they kick it in the front seat

    It’s my favorite day of the week.
    It’s Friday, Friday
    I get to the school
    First class is physics
    I throw my hand up in the air
    I said, hey, yo, who’s Galileo?

    School is done, going home
    I saw her there…

    I didn’t know
    who she was
    But I felt like a Backstreet boy
    walked over to her
    and said

    I don’t care who you are
    Where you’re from
    What you did
    As long as you love me
    She stared at me,
    as I went on

    Am I original?
    Yeah
    Am I the only one?
    Yeah
    Am I sexual?
    Yeah
    Am I everything you need?
    You’d better rock your body now

    She slapped me
    In the face
    I took a look at the clock
    as I passed the time

    Seven forty five
    I’m having fun
    fun, fun, fun, fun, fun
    today it is Friday
    yesterday was Thursday
    Tomorrow it is Saturday

    Today it is Saturday
    woke up feeling like P. Diddy
    brushed my teeth with a bottle of jack
    Heading out again
    probably not coming back
     
  2. Roxas&Sora4E Traverse Town Homebody

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    I kinda got 2 flashbacks of 2 songs...
    1. Rebecca Black- Friday
    2. Ke$ha- Tik Tok
    None-the-less, it was pretty random :D Good job! :lolface:
     
  3. Kites Chaser

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    Ahahah oh my god wow I like the way you incorporated a whole bunch of songs into this. Especially the fact that all of these songs have been overplayed so much makes it even more funny. Good job.
     
  4. Noroz I Wish Happiness Always Be With You

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    Thanks, that's what I was going for ^^,

    Songs:
    Rebecca Black - Friday
    Ke$ha - Tik Tok
    Backstreet Boys - Everybody (Backstreet's back)
    Backstreet Boys - As Long As You Love Me

    I added a meme as well

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  5. Keyslinger Merlin's Housekeeper

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    This was creative and hilarious at the same time. xD The dude in the poem thingy sounds like a total player though.
     
  6. Beau Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Oh, I started laughing as I continued to read!

    I really like how you incorporated different crappy songs into it!

    Very funny and very good as well~! c:
     
  7. Korosu Kingdom Keeper

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    Haa this made me smile c: Creative and funny at the same time. I love how these songs are/were overplayed soo much too. Did you just make it up on the spot? Or did you have time to write it? If you just made it up on the spot, woah awesome. Good job.
     
  8. Noroz I Wish Happiness Always Be With You

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    Thx to everyone for the compliments :) And it took me about 1 hour to write.