Traditional Art Random Anime Girls drawing

Here's another drawing I drew before, inspired by my friend's avatar in another site. Yeah, so pls. give me points where I can improve on, that'll be it for now.

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It's supposed to be Kairi and Selphie, right?

Anyway, they look to skinny, anorexic even.

 

hmm does rmind me of Kairi and Selphi...

and i agree with Shadow... they look kinda anoexic.. the arms are skinny.. and thats about it.. other then that.. its a pretty good drawing.

 

O.O That's really gd.

Firstly, the top section of the pink girls hair is a bit too high. Try to bend it straight down with the backside of the hair after the bandana. (or watever that's called)

Other than that, it's awesome.

 

I think the skinniness is in the style...
And also, Kairi & Selphie are sorta beanpoles themselves so xD;;

I think it is cute, and while you're definitely in a certain genre of art it has a personal touch to it as well. I like!
Hope to see more soon-

 

i really like it. you did a really good job.

the only thing wrong with it is the anerexic waistes.

 

It's good! 'cept they look anorexic and all. :P

 

Same here. Like a shoujo style kind of thing. Or whatever its called.

I really like this drawing. It's cute, well drawn, and everything was given careful attention too. The patterns are just lovely, it really makes the clothing look good. The details from the grass to the book just make everything look so natural, like it belongs perfectly in the drawing. I cant wait to see more drawings in the future~

 

Wow! It's so cute! ><

But what bugs me is the hair of the pink haired girl. The bandanna, looks weird, I think you should have put her ear there and then yeah, put the headband behind her ear and all. :3
but besides that it's really cute! I love it! And it does look like a shojo mange kinda thing. xD

 

I see you tried a nice cute shojo style there. Now I see that the hair on the supposed "Kairi" is a little too high for her head so next time try and make it a little smaller so that is doesn't look that way. Also the girl on the right...her hair to the right is a little to sticky like. Make it a tad more wavy and it would've looked nice. Also make sure you cna flesh them out some more. That way, they don't look as anorexic.​

 

as soon as i saw it i said it looks like kairi and selphie (actulyi said it looks like kairi and selphie or whatever her name is lol)
but if it was kairi and selphie, kairis hair is wrong pink and to short for kh2 which is what it looks like