Questions

Rough break-ups suck.
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Why do we cry?
Why do we lie?
Why do we die?

We're hurt.
We're insecure.
We're fragile.

Why do we need?
How do we see?
Why do we lead?

Selfishness.
Others perspective.
Others follow.

Why did I cry?
Why did you lie?
How will I die?

I loved you
You hated me
Alone.

 

Why? Because that is who we are.LOL umm..IT WAS COOOOOOLLLL

 

Thankies =D

 

Yur Welcome!

 

Wow, very good...although I think you meant to say "Other's" instead of "Others perspective"...but otherwise, great job. Although the end, 'alone' it sounds...I don't know...like some other word would be better. Such as 'abandonded' or 'Forgotten' or something...it just needs a word with a stronger impact instead of 'alone'. But overall, I really love the poem, I can really see the emotion in this...