I was thinking of placing it near the left side. Bottom left to be precise. That's good too, but it looks...a bit sudden if you know what I mean. Try taking a small soft brush and putting a overlayed shadow where the render touches the box. On my Crysis tag that's what I did =\ But for you, yeah. Your text are usually...a bit bad. This one's a giant leap forward lawl.
That's a good idea. Start whoring up the guest memberage on PR Critique section. I do that tons of times xD