I made this Idea for a roleplay but noone really cares about my rps so I made a story. CnC plese -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Prolouge Hurt….Guilt……Pain…… that what I thought about when I was awoken from my sleep. All people around me….trying to kill me …..They don’t know who I am. They think I am a worthless girl who cant defend herself…..No….that’s not me…..that’s used to be me…but not anymore. In here I have changed……no one stays the same here….not even the nicest person in the world…… That’s what I heard when she was alive…my protector, my guide, someone who would not even leave me here in this place. She says she never sane. That was hard to believe honestly, sane as Edgar Allen Poe, if you know who he is. If you don’t….say she’s as sane as a rabid dog. I’m never using any names in the story I’m about to tell you. This is a true story, every bit of it. By the end of the story I’m about to tell you, well you’ll know why. And I am going to tell to how it started, where it started, everything, from start to finish. And since this is a true story I’m not going to say “It began in a dark, cold night”. I’m going to tell you where the horror truly began. It began in the shower.
.........not bad.....better than anything I would ever come up with....if I ever come up with anything......a few spelling mistakes here there....left out a word....a few grammar mistakes...but stuff like that happens....if you want me to tell you where I'll edit this post.....otherwise please continue....though....I get the feeling I shouldn't read this story....(horror makes me stake awake for a month without sleeping.....okay...that was an exaggeration.....but seriously....)
OMG thank you everyone. Im at school but I made Chapter one. In my opinion its good but here you go. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 1 I was in the shower…..thinking…breathing…thinking…..letting the water pour on my back. I had scars on my back, from my Mom; she beats me all the time. They stung like hell; I was on the bridge of crying. Water was pouring down my head…my hair…to my feet. My Mom, she beat me when I do good, when I do bad, even when I didn’t do anything to her She like to beat me because she always drunk, because of my dad. He left me when I was one. I don’t really know him well, I would like to but in a sense I don’t want to know him. But I have this feeling that he’s want to look for me. “Jasmine†my mom exclaimed. “Come down here and cook my diner!†I rolled my eyes. Why would I have to cook your dinner when I don’t even have dinner myself! I cut off the shower and looked down at the floor. I wish I could leave this hell I thought. My Mom thinks I’m her maid…..no her “Buddy†she calls me. Why does she call me that, I don’t know but I sure don’t like it. “Buddy†she said when I came out the shower and went downstairs. “I want steak†She said looking at the T.V. She was fat and ugly. Over 500 pounds, on my guess. She looked like she’s been drinking the night before. She always drinks nothing new. She had a tee-shirt on. It didn’t even fit her and it was an extra large! I sighed and looked in the kitchen for a pack of T.V dinner. She really doesn’t know the difference between that and a steak. Weird I would say! I looked out in the freezer when something caught my eye. A letter on the table. I looked at it very cautiously. It can’t be….she been talking about it…but I didn’t think she would actually do it. I picked it up and looked at the letter. I was in shock In the front of the letter it said Troublesome Children Adoption Agency.
Wow the first chapter was really good! And letter *gasps* how could her mother..or eh...:D it was good:D Please continue when you have the time:D:D:D 100% cool and good and more;D
I made another chapter! Whooo! Enjoy! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 2 I looked at the letter in shock. It couldn’t be….Its not…..she said I was leaving but not this soon. I got this feeling of distress and pain. I wanted to leave this place but I had no where else to go. I sighed in contempt and hate and I took the letter and went to my Mom. “Mom†I said trying to hide my contempt for her. “What do you want from me†she yelled at me, a bottle of Vodka in her hand. “What is this?†I asked showing her the envelope about the adoption agency. She looked at it. Her eyes were red, she was all red when I gave her the letter, but not with hate or fear, no, but with joy…happiness. “I been waiting for this for all month†she said as she opened the letter. She smiled her ugly smile as she read it. Her teeth….green as the grass. And her gums…..black as the night. If this was your first time actually seeing her, you would think that she was a monster of the night. “You’ll leave me soon enough…in a week perhaps†said my Mom said evilly. “You’ll have no family….just some bad-*** kids around you …..Just like you are!†she said wickly. I was in shock. She wouldn’t do that I thought to myself, lying to myself. I just stared at her with a pitiful look on my face, tears coming down my face. I tried to stop crying but I burst down crying. “I …don’t….want to leave to that place†I said as I sobbed. Then I was full of hate and contempt. I went into the kitchen and got a knife. After all I have done for her she wants to kick me out…to an agency to. I came back in the room and pointed the knife at her. “What are you doing†she yelled with hatred but also fear. I didn’t answer her but instead I pointed the knife at her chest and then stabbed it. The blood trickled down the knife….like a waterfall.
no rush, i just didn't want this story to become a one post then let it die, this is good. Don't worry it'll come to you.
