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  1. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Like what? I have a vague idea of how I want the story to be but I'm not entirely pleased with what I have...
    I should probably mention I'm leaning towards setting the story in a modern Earth setting, so don't expect any KH references outside of usernames. I want the story to feel as JoJo as possible.
     
  2. Bite the Dust Traverse Town Homebody

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    We have choices for key points as well:

    1. Anything to do with the primary JoJo's Stand
    2. Major Event going on in the story
    3. Primary Setting
    4. Key characteristic/affinity of the primary JoJo

    Trying to name it without knowing which way this is going is gonna be a little difficult. One name that I can think of, if the primary JoJo is still Dinny, right now is "Dimensional Caravan." Not the best, but it's something.
     
  3. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Dimensional Caravan might work cause the plots I came up with involve Dinny jumping into an alternate universe, SynK sought her out because his Stand can allow him to see into the future, then they go on a bizarre adventure. I've come up with two plot ideas so far:

    1. Dinny jumps to a universe where Stands are more or less public knowledge and there is some big competition involving Stand battles. Naturally Dinny learns this from SynK who is looking for people to team up with to compete in this competition and Dinny, being the dimension hopping explorer she is, joins up. This one doesn't appeal to me as much.
    2. Dinny hops to an alternate universe, gets found by SynK who is out looking for people to combat this universe's equivalent to Dio, GS. Dinny agrees because, well... LOOK, DO YOU WANT A JOJO STORY OR NOT?! That's the reason.
     
  4. . : tale_wind Ice to see you!

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    Tournament stories get pretty old pretty fast, I think. The idea doesn't even appeal to you, the author, anyway. Definitely go with number 2.
     
  5. Bite the Dust Traverse Town Homebody

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    Lol, alright then. Although, if GS is gonna be the Dio Expy of our little story, she'll need little convincing to stop a Dangerously Genre Savvy Evil Overlord Magnificent Bastard who loves to Kick (Read: Burn) the Dog with a Big Screwed-Up Family. Just sayin'.
     
  6. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    It would of kind of been what you'd get if you cross JoJo with MadWorld, in which your ranking in the tournament is determined by who you killed to get that position. For example you could go from Rank 100 to Rank 50 by killing the previous holder. But the idea I had was there wasn't any sort of "x vs. x" tournament going on, it was more of a "you fight anyone in the tournament you happened to bump into" kind of tournament, which brings up a whole ton of writing headaches.
    True. Now the problem is trying to avoid making it too much like Stardust Crusaders with KHV members.
     
  7. Bite the Dust Traverse Town Homebody

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    Well, if we get the Stand-creating Arrow involved and get a few Evolved Stands (and possible Requiem Stands, you know, if you want to) in here, it should be different enough. Also, It's not like they are trying to Dimension Hop around before a certain number of days pass by. I feel that should differentiate it enough.[DOUBLEPOST=1401681883][/DOUBLEPOST]Also, Dimension Hopping. Just, yeah. That's super different, so no worries on that front.
     
  8. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Okay so here's what I'm thinking for the beginning:
    • Dinny hops to setting universe
    • SynK finds her and convinces her to help stop GS
    • SynK informs Dinny that with the power of his Stand he discovered that GS will be at a certain location on a certain date (both are undecided right now), and to prepare to fight GS they must look for other Stand users to assist with the adventure.
    • GS becomes aware of SynK's plan to defeat her via SPACESHIP (who we all know if he were a JoJo character he'd be called Jefferson Starship) and his Stand tapping a near by car radio and sends assassins to deal with them.
    • SONO CHI NO SADAME! JOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOJO!!!
    Not sure where dimension hopping will come into play that much, besides Dinny using it to teleport spam during a fight. :\
     
  9. Bite the Dust Traverse Town Homebody

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    Ahhh, I see. Teleport Spamming through Dimension Hopping. *wipes patriotic tear* President Valentine would be proud.

    Also, loving the name Jefferson Starship.

    But yeah, I'm loving the plot points you've got so far.
     
  10. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Speaking of President Valentine, I'm also thinking of making GS a politician. I was inspired by Richard III for this idea. For example!

    WE ALL LOVE IT.

    Thank you.
     
  11. Bite the Dust Traverse Town Homebody

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    Lol, bad guy politicians in stories. What's up with that? At least she won't have a hunched back. R-right?

    Also, just because, Ian McKellen

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  12. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    HER STAND IS HER HUMP

    Wait... Dio... Sir Ian McKellen... Richard III... Sir Ian McKellen as Richard III...

    GS is a time & magnetism controlling vampire wizard who is a British Nazi.
     
  13. Bite the Dust Traverse Town Homebody

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    YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!

    Now, if only we could work in Tim Curry into that mix somehow...
     
  14. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    I live for this kind of reaction.
     
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    More and more this is becoming more amazing
     
  16. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    So to recap:
    Dinny is our JoJo (called Jodin Nyjo to justify JoJo title and to keep Dinny's name there)
    SynK is basically our Willaim Zeppeli
    GS is a politician who puts up a front of being a humble statesman (along with a few other ideal traits for politicians) but in actuality...
    Dinny & SynK are on a quest to gather the Knights of the Stand Table (not going to use that name, don't worry) to battle GS because he is a hardcore badass
    And GS is sending a Carnival of Killers after them.
    That makes me glad.
     
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  17. Bite the Dust Traverse Town Homebody

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    We should call the main Stand Protags the Caravan. Just "the Caravan." The Baddies can remain "the Carnival of Killers" because hell yeah, that's badass.

    And man, I'm guessing SynK is in for one grisly death.
     
  18. Makaze Some kind of mercenary

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    Sure...
     
  19. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    I was just referencing a trope with the Carnival but hey someone seems to like it so I will use it.

    I can neither confirm nor deny that possibility.
    Stand Name: Godzilla
    Power(s): Your stand embodies the emotion of guilt, a negative emotion caused by knowing or thinking that one has done something bad or wrong, and harnesses the guilt of others to fuel itself. Normally Godzilla takes the form of a small dinosaur-like creature but the more guilt it consumes, the larger and more powerful it becomes with virtually no limit (strength being in proportion to its size). By biting down on a victim, Godzilla absorbs their grief and guilt into its being and grows stronger from it. People whose guilt has been absorbed will no longer be able to experience guilt themselves. Godzilla may also channel the guilt energy in the form of concentrated beam attacks from its mouth, however doing so will cause Godzilla to shrink in proportion to the amount of energy used in this way.
    Statistics:
    -Destructive Power: A
    -Speed: E
    -Range: C
    -Durability: E
    -Precision: E
    -Development Potential: C
     
  20. Bite the Dust Traverse Town Homebody

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    Alright, alright. Fair enough. Confirmed getting chopped in half

    And ahah, Blue Oyster Cult