Pokemon amathost

Pokemon amothost is a pokemon game where a trainer named Brendan meets a neigboor named May.They became friends over the days until brendan gets his pokemon and they go their seprate ways until one day when brendan goes to the sinnoh region and finds May with Dawn,ash,misty,and brock.He looked with his pals Red,lucus,Jimmy and his pokemon swampert.They said hello and had some fun around sinnoh until all of them saw the pokemon dialga,palkia,darkrai and giratini in the air battling.They all got seperated from each other.It was now ash,brendan,misty,Red.And the others were May,dawn,brock and jimmy.TO BE CONTINUED.Please rate

 

If this is a story,put it in the Creativity Corner.

and I recommend detail and actual Dialogue.

 

Sorry Tularim.The first part was just getting into the story.

 

The hell is this? o.O;

 

So an intro?..ok,that's fine.you should make Chapter's to organize what you do.

 

I'm sorry but could you be a little more original in your story? And not have your characters have any relations with the anime characters? I mean, you could say that they saw them battle or something in the Colosseum.

Oh and you could give some background info on the trainers. Like why they wanted to be trainers and stuff.

 

Ummm, what? Is this supposed to be a story?

 

I second that. I thought this was an RP or something.