Poetry Contests.

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OMG! Minteh. Thanks, everybody ^_^

Many Miles And Some Dude's Backyard Away....
Mother Nature comes back in
but we're going out
The week is for relaxin'
And that's what we're about

We're gonna hit the road
See some sights and some places
Maybe by Freeway or a Boat
Wherever's easer to stack cases

Spring time's around the corner
With the bees and the flora
But we'll be past the border
Sipping tequilas and Corona

So pack the cases in the Hummer
Let's let everything go smooth
The only way it can be a bummer...
...Who's got change for the toll booth? O_O

 

~Travel High, Travel Low~

What's Wrong With The World Today?
No Matter What I'll Find A Way.
Nothings gonna stop me now Ive set my mind.
Just see the world In front of you
Oh, what a wonderful view.
Maybe I'll see that world one final day.

So I'll Travel high, I'll Travel low
Trying to find which way to go
Climb the highest mountain or the Greatest Sea.
I'll Travel low, I'll Travel high
Trying not to be too shy
Walking all the city's or riding In the sky.

Gonna grab my coat and grab my bag
Putting my name on the tag
Don't want to get lost In this big big world.
Maybe I will reach that place
To settle down and rest that chase
To stop climbing the highest mountain In the sky.
I know It sounds too crazy
But my head Is kind of hazy
From all this fuss and all this worry Its put me through.

So I'll Travel high, I'll Travel low
Trying to find which way to go
Climb the highest mountain or the Greatest Sea.
I'll Travel low, I'll Travel high
Trying not to be too shy
Walking all the city's or riding In the sky.

 

Your poem has potential, but you should learn to use capitalization and punctuation properly. Literary pieces aren't like RPing. :huh:

 

Wishes

yea, so I figured i'm heading to florida for spring break, that i'd submit a travel prose for Disneyworld. Hope you all enjoy

Wishes

To all who come to this happy place, welcome.

The plaque reads from the castle steps.
One step forward,
Leafs rustle innocently along Main Street
A train yawns awake far off.
Ragtime music sweeps through the airy courtyard,
Raising a wind deep inside.
One jump ahead,
And through the castle gates I soar,
Returning to the land
Where age stands like a frozen hourglass.

Down cobblestone drives and English manors
Over mountains and around the river bend
Past temples and amongst comets I meander.
Every step a memory,
Every blink a moment longing for a glimpse
Into the imagination of the creator.

Faces fly all around, off to Neverland
Youth clutching the unmoving sands of time,
This land cannot be tarnished.
Upon my head,
Two golden spheres divulge and absorb ​

laughter

excitement​

peace.​

Slowly, a path beckons like a poisonous apple,
Down the rabbit hole I tumble
And awaken, the hourglass loosening the particles,
Back to reality.
​

Traffic,
War,
Anger,
Hate,
Destruction….

Evil.​

That’s what lies before my unwavering eyes
As the world swirls past my porthole in life.
But a smiles rises by night.
​

For up to the heavens jewels I glance, wishing.
My eyes unearth the second star to the right,
The hourglass flies from my hands, shatters
The grains falling like a meteor shower.
I can go the distance.

For one man’s imagination has become my sanctuary
Strangers like me flow toward it each moment,
Escaping the reality to enter a whole new world.

It’s a tale as old as time:
Wishing I could be set free
Wishing upon a star
To defy growing up,
To be a lost boy.

But only one thing remains, one last wish.
I’ll navigate my magic carpet in jungles unknown,
Climb the snow-covered mountain for all mankind,
Discover ocean mysteries with me hardies yo ho
Only to wish for to share this small world

With you
If you shall come too... ​

 

Heres a poem

Can I enter here or is there a diff. place?

 

Yea, just post a reply with your poem for all the world to see...as long as it hopefully pertains to some sort of travel :)

 

K, here comes something off the top of my head about summer trips

On the sea coast I sit,
Watching waves wash my feet.
Yet something dosent feel right,
What is it?

After this, new school, new me!
I just hope I can become
Something new
For people to see.

All my friends 20 million miles
All so far from me,
I hope they still can,
So far away, remember my smiles.

I'm in my home,
The place that is,
Though so long since I have visited,
Still my own.

What it is that
Bothers me I still cannot decide,
May be its that to my friends
I've finally tipped my hat.

 

I just realized somehing....MY POEM SUCKS!!!!YAY!!!!:nerve::imslow:

 

Thats awesum! does it have sumthin 2 do w/ travel dogh?

 

no but i think i'll take it out . and make a new one ^^

 

Come on guys, any more takers for this month's contest?? I know alot of you are good poets, you just all submit something!!

 

wow... sorry I've been a bit short on time lately... :sweatdrop: well, i have a bit of time right now so give me a sec to come up with a good poem... XP

 

Come on guys you have about 2 hours left (:​

 

thanks but i don't really care about winning its just that it's fun letting everybody see what you can pull out of the blue

 

I gave an extra hour, I can't give anymore >.<


Thread closed


Good luck dearies <3​

~Locked~​

 

Poetry Contest: March 2008

FINALLY WE HAVE THE DAMN THING SORTED :sweatdrop:

Winner of last months was a brilliant poem written by ~Sasumi~ congratulations dearie <3 we all loved it.

chachacha so on to this months, and lets see if we can get LOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADS of entries this month my loves.

Theme: Spring (I know it's unoriginal >.>)

as always, 7 lines minimum.

PLEASE WATCH GRAMMAR AND SPELLING ETC ETC, A LOT OF GOOD POEMS ARE HAVING TO BE DISCOUNTED BECAUSE OF BASIC SKILLS.

Deadline: 30th March 2008

Results posted: 5th April​

 

spring

Spring at last a new begining for everything
The earth begins it's journey around the sun once more.
The rain clouds dissappear to be replaced by warm sunlight.
Spring flowers will start to grow once more.
The beach will once again be over crouded.
The earth has another 365 times to spin.
Lots of things happen in spring that won't happen in summer, autumn and winter.​

oh and congrats ~Sasumi~ i really stand no hope this time i haven't had time to work on my poems i have exams next week i've been spending most of my free time revising

 

Goodbye Winter <3


My boots are lost
My mitten is hiding
My snow suit too little
My sled isn't riding

The snow goes away
The rain appears
More flowers, grass
and birds to hear

The wind comes near
so warm and dry
It's time to get
my kite to fly

My short sleeves
and my medium shirts
go along together
with my knee high shorts

Spring has come
Oh me oh my
To winter
I finally say Goodbye​

<3

 

Here is mine!

~Spring Forever~
Winter has come and gone,
Spring is on it's way.
I think about my loved one's,
each and every day.
Flowers are budding,
grass is growing.
Spring is here to stay.​

 

Good Bye And Hello

Good Bye Winter.
Hello spring.
Goodbye cold snow.
Hello fluffy bunnies.
Goodbye frosty trees.
Hello pretty colourfull flowers.
Goodbye beautiful christmas carols.
Hello sweet singing birds.
Goodbye last year.
Hello new year.​