Ok, I am not back, I am still on break, but I promised you guys this <3 <3 Winner of January's contest is Spunk Ransom with this piece of work, it flows nicely and I like the idea, the only thing that was a slight concern is that some of the rhyming seems a little forced. Ms Scarlet and Fayt, yours were very close <3 Theme for February: well I am pretty sure that it is a repeat, but hey its Valentines Day in a couple of weeks and I am in a romantic mood, so lets see what you can do with Love and Romance Deadline: February 28th Results: March the 2nd Good luck loves <3 See you around.
Midnight promise The seconds tick by. A special day aproaches. How do I say what needs to be said? What gift is special enough for your perfection? Flowers are pretty and they smell nice. So similar to you yet you are so much better. My love is hard to explain. It doesn't have a need to be understood. I do have a very strong desire for you to love me. I just want you to know your love is you choice. I just want you to be happy. Its the only thing in the world. Now finally the clocks all chime together. The sound beautiful. I prefer your voice any day. Now before midnight is over I'm making you this promise. I have loved you the instant I saw you. I am yours for eternity. EDIT: The reason I bolded the letters A M and Y Is because I'm crazy in love with a girl named amy. The poems for her.
Well, I made a poem of love....maybe I could post it some time around. I'll try to post it since I've been pretty busy, bit wanna get back.
Angel Wings ~ I was alone; a broken girl, Aching wounds, no more tears to cry, Until you took my hand in yours And lifted me into wide blue sky. You showed me love; and showed me joy, Caressing touches healed my heart, You kissed me softly with caramel lips And promised we would never part. Whispered promises; I fell for you, To say those three good words was such bliss, Enchanted, I waited under the willow each night For comforting words and a sweet kiss. You guided me; lead me through life, Almost unbelievable, I feel I could fly, Maybe; I wonder as you take me in your arms Are yours angel's wings that lift me in the sky? The timing doesnt feel right >_< But unconventional is okay...right? Right? *tumbleweed*
Meh, I couldn't conjure up anything this time i'll just leave this gibberish here. As you can tell this is my weak point topic XD Upon wings of glistening gold. A chariot takes them away. Far across the sea below, Hearts escape the bay. Arrows shoot in every light, Eyes are opened wide, Catching gazes every night, Love is on both sides.
meh Friends, that is all I look at you And I see, a friend Loyalty & kindness Lasting till the end I remember when you liked me, You offered to carry my bag The truth back then was, Love made me gag! Now were older... Can you imagine? If we were something more Just friends is just boring It would make my heart sore If that were to happen And no one made a scene Like Romeo and Juliet A secret in between I’d have someone to love On Valentines Day Someone who feels about me In the exact same way If we were to fight And our relationship was to break We wouldn’t speak anymore And my heart would just ache It’s settled... So we’ll go on a date And I’ll give you a call But for the time being, We’re friends, that is all If I have a better one later, I'll post it. for now, that's attempt number 1.
Valentines day poem! My life moves fast. Way too fast. I haven't found the one. The one that would, be there when I cry. The one who would never let me die. But I'll just keep searching fast, until the end. Yesterday, I saw the one. The boy from my dreams. He had blue eyes, blond hair and the sweetest smile. But does he like me? That's the question, I really need an answer for. I saw him again. This time alone. Not with friends. I froze like stone. He walked to me. Smiling like the sun. I began to think; He's the one. I'm in my room. Brushing my hair and trying to find, the cutest wear. He had asked me out, on a dream date. After our date. He kissed me good bye. And gave me some blueberry pie!! PIE! Have a delicious Valentines day!!!
K here's one of my good poems that i recently wrote about someone i care about. hope its good enough! :D FAITH There are three words that so many poems are written about So many, innumerable ballads and pleas sung passionately Lives and deaths lain out in the name of a simple phrase A different saying for those that actually mean the words Yet we, my love, have mastered that mountain already We have been able to speak those three words easily Our love, no matter how strong, can still be tested... But it is only treated so to make it ten times stronger Now other impediments stand in our paths The light of faith's sun snuffed by heavy, doubtful clouds Clouds of ignorance, rain of anger, and a mist of jealousy And it becomes so hard to see that in front of us But there is one faith that ties us inseparably No faith of a church, mosque, temple, or chapel can hold A faith that, dare I say, is much stronger... And that is our mutual faith in each other My path of life is not clear and never will be The constant labyrinthine ways cannot be solved Too many choices, hardships, conflicts, and obstructions are there I scarcely know which way to turn or stumble Yet I have one light, one luminous hope I cling to constantly One person who can catch my arm in the cloudy dark You are there, my love, to be my only hand and heart And, more importantly, our faith in US is there always as well That is all the reassurance I needed then, now, always. You and me... US.
I forgot about this contest D: Is it okay that I wrote the poem on another thread? xD I kinda didn't see this 'till after. http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=76034 Is it okay if the poem is kinda about love, but more...like being broken hearted, or longing?
My Entry: Maelstrom Sitting there, lost amongst the dialect of phrases, my eyes are prone to wander. A glance is all I dare to steal away, A whispers more than I deserve. Suns and moons entwine the sky As customers sweep the pebbled shore, Eroding pocketbooks and expanding girths. Behind the counter your ginger eyes ingest the sea. Children screech, removing you from your slumber, Serenading the café booths with ease, juggling wit and requests. Your course leads you past my starboard, I work to fashion courage forth, to introduce my name. What’s in a name aside from glyphs and curves, An honor and a curse, lost amongst the shawls of my past. To be given merit, I like how it chimes, Yet your answer is my desire. Years I’ve came into port here Each day your aura bewitches my soul, Filling my life with cautious jubilance Yet you know nothing of this, for my name is still my own. To announce the feelings hidden within my chest, Would air on lunacy, off settling. How can one feel amored without saying a word? The answer is singular. My feet set course toward your station, Slipping between skippers and decorated commands. You take my check with a cornered smile, enough to make me crack: “My name is Hawkins. I’d like to ask you out.†Your face reddens as you sweep a girlish grin into the background, But the wheels are turning behind her stonewall teeth. She twirls a pen beside my receipt, her eyebrows raise playfully. “Mr. Hawkins, call me Elizabeth.â€
Finding You People told me you were dead But I needed proof So I started a Journey Finding You I walked a thousand miles But all I found were Traces I never gave up hope I knew you were out there I just had to Prove it My answer was always Dead-ends I was so confused But so sure Something kept pulling me back was it fear that you might be Dead One day I found a letter from you You told me you were dead and that was all you said What people said was the truth I has Proof So I ended my Journey Finding You :3
