Poem: Words

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  1. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Words that flow so smoothly from your mouth
    So soft and tantalizing
    Like telling a fairytale
    Weaving your story from your fingertips
    Adhering to your lips
    Moving and flowing with the action
    As slippery as the sands of time
    That escapes and eludes its capture
    To be scattered across the wind
    Planting its seed elsewhere
    Blossoming beautifully, yet so wickedly
    Spreading incessantly across others' lips
    Once thrown and extracted
    Can never be withdrawn...


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    Just a poem I've thought of...hope you like it! :)
     
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    :bounce::woohoo: I enjoyed it Nymph! :)
     
  3. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :glomp:
     
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    I like everything you do! just so awesome
     
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    Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :) :glomp:
     
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    I luv it! keep it up! XD XD
     
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    GREAT WORK from Nymph from happy freak T.F XP
     
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    lol Thanks, both of you! :) *:glomp: Destiny and TF*
     
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    The wording for this.....WOW. It sent a twitch down my spine, good job.
     
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    Pretty good length....mainly describing the length when I say that....not saying its not good enough or anything like that.....good free verse.....but for atmosphere had me a little confused lol....at first it sounded light-hearted...but then it started to change near the end....but I did like it.....of course I really like your happy ones :P......your becoming a good poet....keep it up......
     
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    LOL.

    You made a poem about words using words themselves. But it describes them well. I love it when words are used artistically. Good job.

     
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    Thanks everyone, I'm glad you like it. :)
     
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