Poem: Thoughts on a cold, winter night

Thoughts in a cold, winter night
Wondering in the night,
thinking through and through,
Wondering if I might
ever be with you.

For when I see your beauty,
When I see your eyes,
it seems you are the pirate's booty,
and i, the one that lies.

The things I feel, these hands of yours,
My heart begins to heal and jump,
out of all the horrors,
In my throat begins a lump.

In the winter, when you're cold,
My hands are here for you to hold,
this heart of mine is to you, sold.

 

Thias one was really pretty kingdomglory7.
I liked it alot! It's really pretty n_n.

 

Thankees >w<
I wrote it for English class, and everyone said it was great!

 

Cool poem! It's really well writen, I myself read it 3 times before posting this.
Really cool poem! :)

 

Thanks, man/Woman!!

Man!
I didn't know I'd get this good of feedback!

 

*coughs man coughs*

Wy are you surprised? when poems ans stories are well writen and have a good sense, they always get good feedback!

 

I didn't think it was good.

Oh sorry, man!

 

I luvs it Kglory!!!

 

THANKEEES, JAZZ~
aGAIN, IT was for English

 

Wow....I can relate to this. Nice poem!!

 

So true!
So can I!
Emoness poem ;-;

 

Kind loving opinion: Its pretty and rhymes.

Real Opinion : Its trite, cliche, and needs revision. I don't see anything in this poem I havn't read 100 times elsewhere. Try to separate yourself with better concrete images.

 

John, fkin' jerk. XD


But yeah. I agree with your statement, brother.

 

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