Poem: The Game

In my opinion, this is one of the crappest poems i have written so far, but it was the only one i could find *shrugges* Enjoy.......... I guess...............

Life is a game,

In the beginning there are no winners, no losers,

No teams, everyone plays fair,

All of that had vanished,

There are teams,

Winners and losers are everywhere,

People play dirty, people get hurt,

The goal is to win and people will do anything to get it,

To impress, to have the cool dress,

Drugs are on the Court; People are lost in the Game,

All we have is our friends,

In the end, no one wins,

Its just the way Life is,

Everyone dies one way or another,

Strong, Weak, Young, Old,

Some people die before their time,

When the dust has cleared, everyone has died

Is this what we want?

For us, for our kids?

The answer is NO,

I don’t know how we can live,

In this world of madness,
In the Game

Of,

Life.


Please Comment :D

 

It's true...it's so true....nice poem!!!

 

I wrote it one night after a dance, when one of the boys who used to go to my school came to the dance and brought alcohal............ and i was a really sad time for me to see someone i really cared about doing that stuff, SO I WROTE A POEM!:D

 

I liked it...cause well its true!

 

Its easier to relate to things if you can truley have a feel for what the person is saying. *shrugs* thats my theory

 

This one is pretty good (:
You are pretty good at this , me on the other hand could not have been worse.
Good job you are really good with this.

 

Lol. I just think its intersting how i thought is was crappy but someother people liked it for reasons im not quite aware of

 

True

So true, I wrote some poems too hahaha.....one of my friends put it on her binder IM KIND OF MAD oops caps but its really personal and I TOLD her not to show anyone and she puts it on her binder

 

Go figure..... steal it back from her in the middle of the night