When your heart is broken... The pain hurts Like a bruise The pain stings Like a bleeding cut The pain singes Like a burning flame The pain scathes Like an arrow The pain hurts... But never forget... It will disappear As soon as it came It will no longer hurt As it did before It will vanish As snow before the break of dawn It will be a forgotten memory As if scattered in the wind It will disappear... So cheer up...and smile == A poem for my friend, hoping it'll cheer her up. :) It's not one of my best works but I tried...
Good length....good free verse.....tricky ending I see :P.......very good ending....another good poem......
I haven't read your other works yet, but this one has some nice wordplay =] I like the part... "It will vanish As snow before the break of dawn It will be a forgotten memory As if scattered in the wind"
