Poem for Stardust

A sprinkling of glitter
Flashing across the sky
Brilliant lights in the inky darkness
Fireworks of incandescence
A surge of emotions
The eye of the hurricane within your heart
A tantalizing feel of senses
Clouding, penetrating, surrounding the mind
A shiver down the spine, a tremor across the earth
Streams of warmth cascading horizontally
Rippling, flowing through your fingers
Disappearing, vanishing before the ground
Imprinted, remembered, impossible to be forgotten
Stardust...​

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This is a late birthday gift for you, my friend, Stardust! It's short, and not one of my best works, but I tried my best...and I hope you like it! :)​

 

completely...wickedly...AWESOME!!!!

Very artistic and poetic, gd job.

 

Thanks! :) I'm glad you like it!!​

 

ooh nice work, I'm sure stardust will like it!

 

Thanks! :) I'm glad you like it! And I hope she will!!​

 

Very pretty sweetie ^^ Love it

 

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) :glomp:​

 

OMG!! -Glomp-

I LOVE it!!! Thank you SO much!! =D It's awesomeandomg.

You're soo good at poems! =O This is amazing! Wow, thank youuu!!! ^^

 

Thanks!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D Happy belated birthday! XD :glomp:​

 

Good length.....good free verse......little confused on atmosphere though lol....its sounds happy at certains parts then a little less so on others.....but overall good poem Nymph....

 

lol Thanks. I always having confusing atmospheres it seems. XDD :glomp:​