Poem: ~Envy~

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  1. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    This is a poem I've written just now. I hope you all like it. Maybe some can relate to it...



    ~Envy~







    I look around at everyone
    Their smiles shine in the light of the sun
    I drop my head with a sigh
    And I run home to cry



    I'm angry at myself every day
    All they do is laugh at what I say
    Everyone raves about the **** they own
    All my trash is never shown



    My heart is shattered
    My life is tattered
    My soul is dead
    My happiness, never fed



    Does anyone show me care?
    No, they show me their hateful share
    Nobody wants to appologize to dirt
    I'm always left alone, hurt



    I walk alone, and always will
    I never get a share of the kill
    I find my own ways
    I'm always the one that pays
    I am the Sin of everything.....



    ...Well? Post your thoughts. I don't care what you say, just make sure it's in the rules allowances, please.
     
  2. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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  3. true darkness Twilight Town Denizen

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    *Claps* well done!! lol, *reps*
     
  4. Shuhbooty moon child

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    It's so sad... TT.TT
    Awesome job!! <333
     
  5. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    Thanks, and I am sad....so it's sad....so yeah....
     
  6. Cia (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧*.✧

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    That was a good poem, Fina. o: I didn't know you wrote poems so well. Nice job. ^_^
     
  7. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    Thank you. I just write what flows through my mind at that moment, that's all.
     
  8. Cia (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧*.✧

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    Oops, lol. I'm so used to calling you Fina that I forgot you had a name change. xP

    But anyway, that's cool 'cause I can't write poems for beans and I probably couldn't write one to save my life. So you're lucky that you can flow it out that easily. T_T I'd never be able to.
     
  9. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    Well, everyone has their talents. I'm sure you have some....more than I. I just write from my heart, is all. And your good at stuff, too, because everyone is good at something. :3



    And you can still call me Fina. I don't mind. ^^
     
  10. Cia (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧*.✧

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    Bah, you've always been too modest. We've all got something, I'll agree with you there. But I've always wished that I could be good at writing poems. T_T But oh well.


    ^_^ And okay.
     
  11. xiegin Destiny Islands Resident

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    Thats a very sad poem but its good