I enjoy this piece, it is well done. The stock looks terrific, and well satisfying in terms of composition. The colors are nice as well. Very pleasing to the eyes. The only things I feel that take away from this are the fact that it seems a little to bright, kind of hard to appreciate the stock a bit, and the words are hard to read. The words work well with this, it's just a strain to read them. Over all this is nice, I do like it. Good job!
Actually, I really liked the text Laplace, didn't detract from the subject like it would if someone else less experienced did it. Of course, with this, it's a little hard to tell it's there, seeing as I didn't notice it until you said something, but looking at this second one feels a little empty where the text once was. Now, for it itself . . . Over all, it's very vibrant, a little hard on the eyes if you look at it too long, but it matches the subject of it pretty well. Up there in the right hand corner, the shapes and designs are a bit jagged, but this isn't too bad, and I really like it. Good job. c:
Oh right, about the stock, those circles and lines are like that because Relius in the original picture is covered by other characters in those parts. For the text, I really need to get better at doing that. Anyways, thanks. c:
To avoid redundancy, my only point is that it seems too cluttered and the depth is lacking. While there may have been characters there on his sides, everyone is overlapping him and it is a bit overwhelming. That one red floral brush hanging around over his collar is particularly annoying. You should lower the opacity or put it behind the character or something. There is too little stock to please me and that brush looks tacky compared to the stock that it is covering so completely. Move it behind him and add depth some other way to make up for the difference, but try to lower the opacity and see if that helps anything. But I like and am happy to see someone who knows their coloring. Good job. How long has it been since you last tried?
Yeah, need to get better at depth. And the last time I finished a tag was about 2 months ago, however the last good one I maded was about 3 months ago.
Hmm, that is better. Did you try adding someone less ostentatious in its place, or was that a no go? It has been a lot longer for me. As least you keep trying.
