Digital Art Photography testing ~ can you guess who it is?

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by xAquaLinax, Feb 27, 2009.

  1. xAquaLinax Destiny Islands Resident

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    I'm new at this! Well, at least the people part anyway. I usually take pictures of plants and flowers. So this is my first attempt at a picture wtih a human being in it. So tell me what you think, what should I improve on yada-yada-yada...

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    So... who could it be? Hmmm... Cookies to anyone who can guess right! hehe (this person is a user on kh-vids, btw)
     
  2. Vanitas Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Good cropping and the pink flower works. Though the pink could be more saturated. I dont get the logic in this blur of yours. The background is only half blurred though it has no perspective...

    Nice work though. Just post more photos and you see what people like and dont like. Then just take the parts they like and try to take a photo thinking of those elements.

    You in the photo? :P Sorry, that´s my only option, since I dont know members of this forum too well...
     
  3. xAquaLinax Destiny Islands Resident

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    Thanks heaps for the feedback.
    I'm not really that good, serious help is needed with me... and not just in photography.

    Sorry, no its not me. It's close friend of mine though, she has her picture posted up on her profile but she looks completely different.
     
  4. Shade Tail Hollow Bastion Committee

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    That's awesome, I like what you did with the flower. A bit of visual hierarchy in photos is always good :3

    Not so keen on the focused blurring though...

    Catfish looks so innocent in this <3
     
  5. xAquaLinax Destiny Islands Resident

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    Oh YAY you guessed right! its Catfish! COOKIES FOR YOU!! and yes she may look innocent.. but in reality.. she's a devil child... shhh dont tell. haha

    Thanks for the feedback.
     
  6. Bareri-San 私はポテトだ。

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    I'm not that good at critiquing but this is pretty good. I think the blurring helps you focus on Catfish more but in some areas it does look a little bit too blurry.

    I agree, she may look innocent here but irl she is pure evil xD
     
  7. Crumpet In your shadow, I can shine!

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    why do my arms look fat? ='[

    i like the sitting pic more
     
  8. xAquaLinax Destiny Islands Resident

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  9. Crumpet In your shadow, I can shine!

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    how the hell did you guess who i am?


    no I'm not... I'm the sweetest, kindest, food giving person you know
    remember what I said... invisible flaws