Digital Art Persona

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Trigger, Aug 5, 2011.

  1. Trigger hewwo uwu

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  2. Llave Superless Moderator

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    Wow! more of your stuff:)

    Things i love about this picture:
    1. Great composition. I love how everything is flowing, makes it look really good. And how the picture is on the side, it's not in the middle. That adds great composition.
    2. great stance for the fellow. it's subtle but yet dynamic in a really positive way.
    3. I like the coffin in the Background, it almost gives it a theme of death along with the gun.

    Things that could prolly use improvement:
    1. the color of the background is kinda distracting me from the rest of the picture. I can understand you may have wanted to use lighter colors to contrast the picture, but i think it is a little bright. maybe a tone down say a tainted looking tan, it kinda looks like that's what you were going for.
    2. I feel the smoke should stay the same, but should disperse a bit more... maybe integrate that with the background a bit more...
    3. Everything feels a bit faded, I love your work, so bring it out i little bit more, not too much. I like the thought, it's just a bit too faded...

    Other than that, you did great once again! Keep it up, i can't wait to see more of your great work!