Digital Art Peace & Catastrophe

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Chad Thundercucc, Jan 1, 2009.

  1. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    Yuuup. New one made by me. CnC pl0x.

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    This one has less contrast...
     
  2. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    Ok Cnc time(Ummmm yeah haven't did Cnc in a while)


    Ok First thing

    I like the backround but for me the colors don't work well for the render so I say choose a color that would match the render better...

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    The C4D on the bottom of the sig Isn't that good it' choppy and messy So I would take that away...

    The light at the top of the sig needs work too...

    It's distracting me from everything else it's really unneeded

    Also I really don't like the border, it's not a really good one for this style your using so I say take away that border and put one around it bout 2px

    I think this is all the problems that I have with the sig


    I say keep working at it and it will be great

    I will give this a 6/10
     
  3. MSUK Twilight Town Denizen

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    Okay, It's time for critique-speculation-language-mode. o.o

    The entire banner has a lot of contrast, but too much of that can be a pretty bad thing, which is why you need to find a happy medium when making transitions to different colors. I see completely different colors on each sides, and then white and blue at the bottom, which shows variety, but really does not blend very well whatsoever.
    I suggest you find ways make the render blend into the banner, as all the colors surrounding it really do not go consistently.
    Also remove that spot of white light at the top. That just looks strange above all things.

    Needs improvement, but has potential.

    6/10

     
  4. Bareri-San 私はポテトだ。

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    its alright, but i think you need to remove the effect thats in front of the render (a C4D render???) it kind of kills the whole sig.
     
  5. Shuhbooty moon child

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    >_>

    I love the effects!!
    But her face is a tad dark, and I think you should make it alittle bright?
    D:
     
  6. Beauxxx Destiny Islands Resident

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    The light source looks plastered in and un natural.
    Since its above her, then there should also be lighting around her to fit that concept. Too overly contrasted, work on your transitions between light to dark, in general. Otherwise, your work will lack symmetry.

    The effects are too diverse in both color, placement, flow, and execution. The effects should all fit a couple of schemes rather than have a small little explosion of sets that don't compliment one another, let alone with their colors.

    The piece in general has no sense of direction rather than a stock, a background, and a heavy light source. There should be flow to give it a crisper and more original feel. The contrast lowered the quality of the stock immensely, go easy, baby cakes.

    Oh. and break the rating system.
     
  7. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    The light source needs work. Contrasting is also
    a issue at the moment. The colors are to Saturated IMO
    and don't really blend in certain parts of the tag. ALso the
    render is covered by the C4D at the bottom which is really choppy.
     
  8. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    Siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiince all of you critics think that there's such high contrast, I lowered it.

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