Just to tell everyone before you read this story. I did not write this story. It was written by thelightisgone123. He has kindly requested that I put his story up for all you lovely members to read. Paranormal by: thelightisgone123 PROULOUGE Present day. Vincent is a mysterious 15-year-old boy who has never been able to make or keep any friends. He lives all alone since his parents died in an unsolved fire in his house. He now lives in Germany but is constantly moving around never staying in one place for more than a year. He is a very pale boy with long black hair, and dull grey eyes. Six-foot three is his height. This is his story of his struggle in understanding his unique abilities along with himself in general. His story starts and ends with only pain. 1. Dream appearance Darkness surrounded. That same familiar pain filled Vincent’s heart, along with suffering and hatred. Vincent realized he was having that dream again, the same one he had had for his entire life every now and then. It started out nice and simple enough it showed a small, silver, circular crest falling out of the sky and landing on top of his chest. That’s when it got bad. The small crest shone and a bright star started to resonate and the small talisman sunk through his skin like it were only water and then his mother and father appeared from the shadows wearing some sort of lab coat as he described it to himself. Vincent tried to move but as usual he was unable too so he just sat through the rest of the dream trying to wake up and block out the images of his body bursting into flames and him being unharmed while his parents burned alive. Vincent awoke with a start and instantly felt massive pain and he looked to the usual spot his chest where a star shaped scar was burning yet again. Vincent ignored the pain and got out of his cot and went to take a shower. After his shower Vincent noticed that he was late yet again for school, not that he really cared he didn’t bother anybody, his grades were better than anyone else’s and for that no one ever bothered him about being late either. After about another twenty minutes of lazing around Vincent decided to make his way over to school. As soon as Vincent entered the building he sighed at the typical chaos and started to make his way to third period. Vincent slept through all his periods until lunch and began to walk outside to hang in his normal loner spot where he was the only one there. To Vincent’s surprise and annoyance he noticed a girl that constantly bugged him, she had a crush on him for no apparent reason. As soon as he noticed Katie he turned away but she ran in front of him and stopped him dead in his tracks. Vincent sighed and asked what she wanted this time but she didn’t reply she just stared into his hair-covered eyes and after about thirty seconds Vincent turned again and began to walk away when she called out after him. She said four simple words that made him stop his movement the words were “you’re just like meâ€. Vincent turned back to her and with anger and sorrow in his voice he replied, “I hope notâ€. With that he dropped his school lunch, grabbed his backpack and began walking home again. Vincent was pissed off now, for some reason just talking to that girl made both his head and star scar both burn and hurt. Vincent took off his shoes and shirt and lay on the cot in his small apartment. Vincent spaced out and began to think about random things such as the fact that it was almost time for him to move yet again, because he was tired of this place, and he tried to figure why Katie had said something like what she did. Vincent wasn’t able to finish his thoughts before he noticed a small womanly figure sitting in the corner staring at him. Vincent jumped up and backed away from the figure and adjusted his eyes to the dark room. Katie stood up from the corner and began to walk to Vincent while unraveling a cloth on her hand to reveal a small dark X on her wrist. End of 1
Hmm, beautifully written, uhh, thelightisgone123. I really like it, reminds me a bit of Harry Potter, minus the magic. DO I SEE ROMANCE? please say yes xD Anyways, watch out for sentence structure, there should be commas here and there, but other than that, it is really good.
Hey Tash, he said : wow, haha im sorry im lazy with that sort of stuff, *SPOILER* yes its a romance but also a death in the near future
Tash said: oo, same here xD Trust me, you should read my latest English Assignment >< FAILURE PERHAPS? yesh. anyways, YES!! lol, I'm a romance bug >< eek to the death, but I like some sadness, all happyness can be gloomy sometimes.
Tashy he said: but well i wont post anymore but it gets really sad im sorry to say, ill write more soon
Wow...thelightisgone123, you really know how to make a story intriguing, and with just the first chapter...it moves quickly enough and it has potential for more. From the above comment I read, I like a nice mixture of sadness and romance so I can't wait to see more... Although I have to admit, there should be some commas in certain places, and at the end of a dialogue, the quotation marks should include the puncuation as well. Otherwise, it's a great story so far... But if I may ask, is this somewhat based on Vincent...? -- Oh and Muffin, it's very nice of you to do this for thelightisgone...
hehe well im back you all miss me, haha thanks for reading it, sadly no nymph this isnt based on vincent that you loved, i sent you a message on youtube and im so sorry. well anyways ill keep writing
