The lighting is good, but I think you should dupelicate it, move it above the original, Merge it down, and sharpen it up, and maybe add a little more pink around the white too. Flow is good, but lighten up the white lines to the right, cause it doesn't really look all that great with a lowerd opacity. Stock is render'd poorly, and the stock also seems low quality. But, aside from all of that, your design and idea is great, I like the effects you put in here. Great job ;).
Oh, I forgot about the text >.< Okay, duplicate the text layer and gaussian blur it by either 1-5 Duplicate it until you get a nice light effect around it. I think that would look good on it. But, you really shouldn't have that much tet in a tag. Make it either 1 2 or even 3 words. Again,good job on this one.
oh as far as the text, i was using lyrics from one of the songs so thats why i put so much the render was rendered porly and theimage was of lo quality ill remember some of this for my next one because i always forget to save the psd
PARAMORE <3<3<3<3 I like the colors, but it's not really sig size. The text needs to be blended and the fonts could be a little cooler. Effects are okay, but the render is suckage. Did you feather it?
