Digital Art Oversharpened ftw?

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Misty, Feb 25, 2008.

  1. Misty gimme kiss

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    Followed a tutorial... CnC?
     
  2. mcFabulous27 Destiny Islands Resident

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    Oh my god, very sharp. But there aren't any artifacts or discolorations, so that's good.
    Anyway, work on smoothing out the oversharpened parts of it and then work on adding some lighting and depth. A light color balance wouldn't hurt either.
     
  3. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    Well... it would be a great tag if it had color and wasn't so sharp.

    Depth isn't very obvious either. Text could use some work too. Move the subtext over/down so it's easier to read. Also, a light source right behind Dante would be epic. I can see good light source from there. ;]

    Good job otherwise.
     
  4. Sorax SPAAAAAAACCCCCEEEEEEEEEE is a triumph.

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    Good job on the concept, but oversharpening it is...well, you get the point.

    And like Darkwatch's critique, the depth isn't really obvious.

    I also suggest to move the text just very tiny bit to the right, just to occupy some space. And like Darkwatch said, move the subtext down so it will be easier to read.

    Overall, job well done.
     
  5. Misty gimme kiss

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    Thank you, all. *cookies* :333

    As for color, that might be a little hard, seeing as the stock is B&W, but I'll try. Also... I don't think this is Dante. Some dude named Nero or whatevs. He used to have some creepy-claw hand, if that helps.