Digital Art over the heart-ache that they say...

just a 500X50

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what do you think?​

 

Well, the quote itself is nice, though to keep the flow going I would've put "really" instead of "completely"~

The image itself is just a collage of sorts. Not much CnC can be given on a mash up of screenshots with text.
I probably would've made the text transparent, but that's just my opinion.

Overall, it's alright.
though i am stealing your quote

 

but thanks

and whats CnC?

and i cant make the text transparent ;~;

 

No problem.

Constructive criticism.

I meant that you get rid of the white boxes and just have the text by itself around the screenshots.

 

CnC is "Comment and Critique".
Basically commenting on what you did, saying what you did good and what you could touch up on. xD

Also, you can make the text transparent by getting rid of the white background and lowering the opacity (i am new at this i may be really wrong)
Which program do you use?

Speaking of CnC
I agree with Cat about the transparency, and I also thin you could add an effect to the screenshots. Right now they just look a bit plain, but with with sharpeening/blurring and/or tweaking the colors a bit, it could really pop.

Good job so far. c:

 

thanks i use photo pad and i have no idea how to make the text transparent

 

There has to be a way to make the text transparent, if there isn't, you should get a new program (There are a lot of free and non-free that you can make free ;))
Anyhow, I really like the idea. I'd like to see Transparent text and something done with the screenshots rather than just arranging them.

 

thanks, any recommendations, of a program, besides photoshop(adobe hates me)?

 

Relient K? That is an old name...

I would move the bottom middle picture to the left so that it overlaps like the top one does, and I would definitely get rid of the white background behind the text. I recommend moving to GIMP with future projects, as it will let you use transparent text and things like that.

 

experimenting with gimp...

as some of you recall my previous issues with making the text transparent...

i know its sucks, its not finished yet, im just experimenting with gimp and want know your opinions

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Here you go dude



Not a bad attempt, but I have no idea what you did. You managed to get the text transparent but it did something strange to the images.

 

i was just experimenting,thanks, but i already know how to do that, im just try out new things...

thanks, in fact i did today i just could no take image-pad its way too limited, im still getting use to gimp though

 

~Merged

Due to a similar thread and picture.


I would also like to say that it's a very good attempt at removing the white, it definitely looks better. What I would do is mess around a bit with the image placement to make them seem a bit more random and maybe experiment a bit with different texts. Apart from that I think it's great- you have some high quality stills there.

 

I actually like this a little. The quality of the stills is lovely and it's a lovely saying, I must be the only one but who prefer's the text with the white background, it caught my attention even if it does look amateurish. I'm sure if you test out/practice more, you'll do even better. I suggest what everyone else has said; Trying out with different text/fonts and image placement. Alright job~