Traditional Art Original character pic

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by NeoJecht, Dec 14, 2008.

  1. NeoJecht Twilight Town Denizen

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  2. demonchick25 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    not bad. the shoulders seem too wide for the body, so try to work on your proportions. same thing with the hands. other than that, it's good.

    a good thing to do to try and get your proportions right is to draw some lines and basic shapes as a sort of skeleton to build around.
     
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    I'm really digging the clothing design here. Nice colour choices as well. Keep it up.
     
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    I like your style.

    But the shoulders and way to wide. Your upper proportions are way off. Maybe some armor? But anyways, I like the detail on his pants, but you should make your cloths flow more. His upper body.. looks really stiff. But other then that, it's really cute, and you should keep up the good work! :3
     
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    The hands are a bit small along with the arms, but overall you did a pretty good job with the clothes. 8/10
     
  6. Dredica SNES was the best.

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    The pictures resemble Final Fantasy and Naruto characters to me. No offense. The one you posted reminds me of Cloud's clothes, but that's just from memory. The whole scar thing is cliché', you might want to get rid of that. If you're designing characters for a novel, try to make them look more realistic, not so much anime like, but if you're making a magna, go for the anime style. Those are just my opinions.

    4/10.
     
  7. NeoJecht Twilight Town Denizen

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    first he looks nothing like cloud
    second the scar is essential its his thing you see that mark on the first one it came from the scar without it he isn't my guy

    3rd yes i am going to make a manga for him i even have story ready so you be quite

    to everyone else thanks and im fixing the parts you mentioned
     
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    Totally nothing like Cloud's sleeves. The only difference I see with the sleeves is the fact that the shoulder armor thing is on the right shoulder without a sleeve on the arm. Then the sleeveless arm doesn't have the shoulder armor thing. No resemblance at all :\