Original Character/Fan character Role Play Park

((Heh, my little cousin said my character was too weak. Well, at least I know I'm not making her like a "Mary Sue" as RayeofSunshine puts is...xDD))

Nao closed her eyes.
"I can do it..." she thought aloud, and pushed on it. It missed the table and hit the ground, bit at least she got it to move.

 

''it doesn't matter as you miss the first time naomi just trie'' said merlin

 

Nao smiled.
"I did..."

 

''but look when you are in danger and no one is there to resceu you then you must beliefe in yourself and as you miss then its over but as trie and trie and hit one then you are on the good way'' said merlin

 

"Right?..." Nao said, quite confused. She tried again, and this time, she hit the table.

 

''good that was stap 1 now we go to ice its just simple its the same as fire but then comes blizzard'' said merlin

 

Naomi nodded. She did the same thing as she did with fire, and hit the table with ice.

 

''good now thunder'' said merlin

 

"Uhh, same thing right?" Nao asked.

 

''yup'' said merlin

 

Naomi smiled.
"Ok." and she used a thunder spell.

 

''good the next one is cure but where is darkstar you must do it on him'' said merlin ''yeah yeah i am coming natalie is under she drowned so i helped her so yes use cure on me'' said darkstar ''it is just the same'' said merlin

 

Naomi closed her eyes, as she used cure. A very weak cure, but at least she did it.

 

''good good that are the first 4 magic spells there are the next one you must go on adventure and when you are on 5 worlds come then back and i learn you more'' said merlin ''thanks merlin'' said darkstar and is going down stairs

 

"Where is everybody!" Cloud said, confused. "I space out for a couple of minutes, and everybody's gone!" He starts walking.

 

Quid, Came out a random place in the cave, and found the letter "......merlin?"
he said scratching his head "oh well," then hoping to find him Quid ran up the stairs in the cave

((thx emo-chan :D ))

 

((Yeah...I had to leave some indication...
-puts because no one is online))

Nao nodded.
"Ok, thanks, Merlin."

 

He sees the fire door is open and goes inside. He hops onto the first stone and sees bubbles in the water. He gets down on his knees and pulls Natalie out. "Natalie! Are you okay!?" he said, extremely worried.

 

Nao walked into the cave-thingy.

"Huh? Cloud, is that you?" she asked, with her hair in her eyes. She pushes it out to see that is was Cloud.
"Hey..."

 

He looked up and saw Naomi. "Hi Naomi." he said, "You're not still mad at me, are you?"