Organization's XIII *Retry*

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How well is the Rp?

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  6. Stupid

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  7. Crap!

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  1. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    Xajita looked at him and frowned while rubbing her cheek with her free hand "That hurts get off!!" She tried to pull away once again but it only made it worst "Owww!! Fine fine i will tell you!!" Xajita sighed "I used to...when i got my heart it felt like somebody else had taken my feelings from me...So to answer your question...NO i dont anymore NOW WILL YOU LET GO"She shouted "You better not be lying" Xander eyed Xajita "Course im not!!" Xajita was getting p***ed off now and Xander could tell "Where are you going anyway?" Xander asked her "Why should i..." She cut herself off. Last time she said that she got slapped in the face "Fine! Im going to--" Xajita got cut off once more by Dusks and Heartless coming behind her "OH GOD!! THEY HAVE FOUND ME!! BAH!! CAREX LET GO GOD DAMN" Xajita shouted trying to get free
    ~Back to Jordie~
    "To answer your question no i dont trust him but still....He is my friend isint he?" Jordie got up from the ground after trying 5 times to wake Zorx up. She looked at him and remembered that he had said 'Boyfriend' "By the way he is NOT my boyfriend..." Jordie said but was thinking in her head 'Not yet at least...' she shook the thoughts out of her mind.
     
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    "Silence, they're not here for you..." Carex sighed "Nobodies and Heartless...I allow your true purpose to be filled with anger!," Carex yelled in a commanding voice. "No longer shall you be tied to nothing, but freed by one persons heart!," Carex cried with a more booming voice, as the Nobodies began to shape into one with the Heartless. "You all shall become one and with your new-found powers, will come a new breed of the Dark, even more of a Twilit power, and Beyond every Light in this ill-gotten world!" Carex finished as the Heartless of diffrent types, as well as Nobodies, became Twilight Thorn but also with the eyes , wings and Claws of Darkside, but the body was all burning with a dark outside "It has begun.... no more hiding in the shadows Xander!... We're free to roam the worlds even more with this new beast!!!" Carex crackled as he threw Xajita into the wall next to them but held her arm. He then threw her in the air with his hand still on his wrist as he slammed her into the hard cold cement.

    Once he finished with that he put his foot on her chest saying "I guess someone will be forever missed into the light... right Xander?" Carex asked as he had his eye turned to him.
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    Xarken sighed the sat on a tree root, that was sticking out of the ground, "Are you sure about that? I mean you hardly even know yourself, right?" Xarken questioned as he got up off the root then walked over to Zorx, looking at him he put his blade into the ground, at the top of Zorx, as he chanted an ancient Language. "Dota Silo Mak'e, Domio Naughti... Saline..." Xarken said as his sword pulled a blue barrier around Zorx. "He'll be fine trust me... I've done this sort of thing many times in three hundred years... I think I know what I am doing Jordie, or in my language, your name would be "Jor'e"." Xarken smiled as he walked back over to the tree root he was sitting on earlier. "So Jordie.... do you want to know the truth about Zorx? And the unimaginable power swelled within him?" Xarken asked as he had his back up against the tree, "And are you really wanting to go back in time to stop yourself from going into Darkness?" Xarken question, looking at Jordie with displeased turquoise eyes of hurt, pain, and anguish.
     
  3. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    Xajita was in a lot of pain. She looked at Carex with sad and painful eyes and then at Xander who was laughing evilly "Wait!! Carex Please!!" She shouted weakly "If you kill me now you wont kill me forever! I am a nobody of someone! A keyblade bearer....Thats all i know but something tells me her name is Jordie! If you kill me now you will give her other half of her heart back! If you do that she will be as powerful as she is now!! Carex im not just saying this!!" She shouted "I know how to get your heart back...Just give me another chance! PLEASE!" Xajita had her hands on his leg. Very much in pain "So your saying if we trust you...you will just betray us again. Hmm?" Xander wasint laughing anymore "And that Jordie is your real person..? Am i right? Well Jordie will come with me soon anyway" Xander finished "I wont betray you i promise!!" Xajita shouted once more "If we trust you will you do everything we want?" He asked "Yes Yes!!" Xajita cried out. Xander looked at Carex in a way that he could almost read his mind 'Should we?' Was the look.

    ~Meanwhile~

    " Im not sure anymore...I just want to stop everything from happening!! Because its all my fault" Jordie looked away with painful eyes....She remembered the day when she sank into darkness.. "And yes i do want to know what has been happening to Zorx! I ask him but he just ignores it or changes the subject..." Jordie looked back at Xarken
     
  4. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    Xarken sighed as he walked over to Jordie "You're strong Jordie...but not too strong... you're diffrent than other people, maybe even Zorx could see that... and Zorx has the Embodiment Eye... A strong force that can be seen through anyone's heart, of his choosing... when he has an unbalanced emotion inside him his anger grows, as you've seen before, and with that power comes a great deal of misjudgement in him... when he is inside his full state, he will no longer be himself... and he will destroy the ones he cares for." Xarken said as he put his hands on Jordie's shoulders. "Listen to me Jordie... there are more Elemental Lords that will do you harm... and if they do, I can't stop them from destroying everything." Xarken said as he walked over to his sword after seeing that it was turning red. As Xarken pulled his blade out the blue barrier vanished as it went inside Zorx, healing his wounds. As Zorx woke up and tried to stand, the first person he saw was Jordie, who looked away from him "Jordie...what's wrong?" Zorx asked as he walked over to her "She knows already Zorx, about your true nature, and the eye." Xarken said as he was sitting on the tree root.
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    "Don't get sappy with me Xander, you know as well as I do that we clearly have a strong Emobodyment on our side... but we could have use some help." Carex said as he pulled his foot off her chest and picked her up by the wrist again "Xajita... do you hate Zorx because he is in love with another woman?" Carex asked as he pulled her into a wall, while still holding her wrist. "Xander... you may be the fifth Elemental Lord, but I'm the first... Xarken is third, Xel is the second, and Xane is the fourth... so you won't order me, but I will not leave you behind, and Xajita...." Carex gritted as he turned his face to hers "You will listen to everything that I only say, got it?!" Carex yelled with a questioning voice.
     
  5. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    Xajita nodded despite the pain. Carex wasint being as nice as before "And i told you before i dont know why i hate Zorx!" Xajita said trying not to yell. While Carex was turned around Xander rolled his eyes. "Im not being fricken sappy..." He mumbled. Xander then looked at Carex who had heard him "Uhh...Yes i know a good use she could do....It includes Jordie and Zorx as well...." He smiled evilly "Its just we need Xarken to get out of our way" Somehow he knew that Xarken was with them. Xajita just looked at the two 'Man when can i get out of this stupid mess...' Was Xajita's thoughts

    ~ Not far away ~

    Jordie somehow knew Zorx would get angry at Xarken from telling her.... Although she didnt want him too... The feeling that she had right now was strange...a sort of love/hate feeling. 'Why did i have to get into this stupid mess...' She thought. Jordie soon after a minute of silence, looked at Zorx... Who was taking this very good...
     
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    "Jordie.... I'm not proud of what I have but.... you are all that I care for nothing else matters anymore...." Zorx's hair, nails, and eyes returned to their same state before. "Listen Zorx, if you can't destroy the darkness inside you, then all hope is lost in destroying me and the other Elemental Lords." Xarken said as he jumped behind Jordie. "Well Zorx?.... what are you going to do?" Xaren asked as he put the tip of his blade behind Jordie's back.
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    "So... he is here," Carex pulled his hand off of Xajita's wrist "Ok Xajita, now you must go to Xarken and beat him to a pulp... understood?!" Carex commanded as he summoned a Heartless Neoshadow and a Dusk for her aid.
     
  7. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    "But uh..." Xajita stopped herself before Carex hit her. She slowly nodded and headed to where she could sense An Elemental Lord. She finally found Xarken but she had also found Zorx...And a girl...
    Xajita just looked at Zorx then she turned to Xarken and got her sword out "Im a prisoner once again..." She whispered
    "W-who?" Jordie slowly looked at Xajita "The name is Xajita" She said "How about you.." Xajita asked "Jordie..." Jordie replied... They both jumped back "Your that girl!" Jordie shouted "ME?!? Your that girl!!" Xajita shouted back. They were both startled
     
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    "Well, the pieces are set in place Xander, all we need to do now is wait.... well lets go see how long it takes before those two try to kill each other." Carex said as he opened a portal to where Jordie and the others were.
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    "Jordie, Xajita, I.... I tried to tell you, both of you, that I crossed each others backs without knowing," But Zorx was cut off by Xarken "And both of you will fight for the love of Zorx, knowing that neither one will surrender their heart to him, not yet." Xarken said in a poetic term. "Would you butt out Xarken! I've had enough of your talk!" Zorx yelled as his eyes became a more darker Crimson red, his nails grew long and sharp as knives, and his hair became long, all the way down to the back of his knees. "You fool! You keep changing into a more darker being, the more worser it will control you!" Xarken yelled as he was thrown into the tree by Zorx, and passed out, along with his breath, when he hit the tree.
     
  9. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    "Zorx!!" Jordie and Xajita both shouted "Stop it!" They both shouted again "WILL YOU CUT IT OUT?!" Xajita cried "ME?! YOU STARTED IT!!" Jordie and Xajita both eyed each other angrily and Xajita was the first one to make the move.... She cut Jordies Arm "Ow! Grrrrr...." Jordie Ran at her and got her Keyblade out. They started fighting "Well this is interesting..." Xander said wide eyed while watching them fight but he started laughing when he saw Zorx's face "I dont think he is used to two girls fighting over him" He kept laughing but soon got cut off when Carex hit him "Ow.. You didnt need to hit that hard" He rubbed his shoulder and watched the fight trying not to laugh
     
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    "What did I try to say when we wait... we wait for Zorx to choose of Course, if he chooses Jordie, we kill Xajita... if he chooses Xajita, we kill Jordie... there's no other choice." Carex said as he watched the fight between Xajita and Jordie.
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    Zorx soon looked at the two then had more a darker look on his face to the two, then slammed both of them in the face with his feet. "Would you two knock it off!" Zorx yelled as he pulled both their wrists as hard, like Carex did to Xajita. "I told you two that I'm not trying to start a fight between each other, now you want this to stop or hurt more?!" Zorx asked as he pushed harder on both their wrists.
     
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    "Zorx!" Jordie shouted in pain "Let her go she cant handle the pressure" Xajita looked at Jordie "Why you little--" But Jordie got stopped by Zorx pushing harder on their wrists "Z-Zorx we cant help it WE ARE THE SAME PERSON!!" Xajita shouted... Jordie just looked at her "You mean your my...OW!! ZORX!...." Jordie tried to get free "It wont work...Anyway yes! Im your Nobody!" Xajita looked at Jordie as Jordie looked at Xajita "Well this is awkward.." Jordie looked away "Mmm....Very" Xajita sighed "And we cant go together unless Zorx chooses who he wants..." Xajita looked at Zorx and so did Jordie... Xajita was used to the pain but Jordie wasint

    "This isint right!"
    Xander sighed "Not right at all! I should of known Xajita would do something stupid like that..." Xander kept watching
     
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    "Well it would happen anyway, he'll soon become destructive, might I suggest the throwing knife?.. just for the one he doesn't choose." Carex said as he pulled out a knife from his coat pocket and handed it to Xander.
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    Zorx soon pulled both of them up in the air "You two are neither one, how is it that you and Xajita share a resemblance, Jordie? She doesn't have your name in hers, so how is that possible?" Zorx asked as he put them down but held their wrists, and releasing a little pressure. "Quite simple Zorx, she forgot who she was, and in turn...made her Nobody forget her true name, Jordie's true name, and without a true name, Nobodies can not exist, strong Nobodies anyway." Xarken said as he tried to get up off the ground, but failed. Xel soon appeared from a portal to where Carex and Xander were, "You two trying to kill someone again?!" Xel asked as he pulled the knife away from Xander. "Of Course we are Xel, that's what we do! We are trying to make Zorx become darker and more destructive, once we kill the one he didn't choose, he will be under the darknesses control, and then ours." Carex said as he pulled the knife back from Xel.
     
  13. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    Both of the girls looked at Zorx "Could you please let go!? Its not like we are going to kill you or anything!!" Xajita and Jordie looked at each other once again after saying the same thing at the same time. They shook their heads. Then Xajita recited what Xankar said "Hey WHAT!! Im strong!!" Xajita looked away as Jordie laughed "I made myself forget myself...But when i met Krystal and Dean again after being in the darkness i just sorta...you know remembered myself" Jordie sighed "It turns out everything that has happened...Is my fault..." Jordie looked down...
    After a minute silence she lifted her head up "Thats why i want to go back in time...To make things right again!!" Jordie smiled slightly

    "Oh...Uhh Hi Xel.." Xander knew Xel would have a go at them. Xander just watched "IT ISINT WORKING! Grr..." Xander sighed as he watched Zorx become calmer
     
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    Name:ramin'e

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    Title the savage sister

    Gender:female

    Element:thunder

    Appearance:blue hair, pink dress and looks just like namine

    Weapon:2 lightning bolt shaped swords

    Personality:michievous and shows very little emotion

    Bio: she can't remember much of her past but she loves trying to kill innocent people she loves trying to hurt peoples feelings(people who have feelings)and is very tempted to try and kill all of the key bearers with or without backup

    Just for fun, Theme Song:i hate everything about you by Three Days Grace

    Loyal Nobody Follower: don't have one

    Loyal Heartless Follower:she doesn't have one of those either
     
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    "That is your problem Xander, I'll attack the one he cares for now." Xel said as he jumped down off the tree branch. "The fool is gonna get himself killed by Zorx... not to mention that Jordie has gained trust, by Xarken... with them fighting Zorx...it should be a piece of cake wouldn't you agree?... unless Xarken betrays us and attacks Xel." Carex said with a doubtful tone.
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    Zorx soon loosened less pressure on their wrists "Listen... if you two merge... What would happen?" Zorx asked as he took his hands off their wrists. "Forgive me... it's the...."Zorx sighed as he tried to finish but couldn't see straight "It's the eye that controls me, Jordie....your father, he told to protect you if he died...by anything, even me....or you, so you see why I must not harm you." Zorx finished as sat on the ground starting to turn back into his original. "Well.... if it isn't the true beings of Twilight, Light, and Nothing!" Xel yelled as he laughed "Xel! What the hell are you doing here!?" Xarken questioned as he got on his feet, "Thought I'd drop by, y'know, killing and what-not?" Xel smirked as he summoned fire-craken whips that appeared in his hands. "You're too weak Xarken, rest and I'll take care of these fools." Xel said as fire started to burn leaves from his whips that lashed towards Zorx and the others.
     
  16. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    Jordie got her keyblade out soon enough And Xajita got her sword out "ZORX! If you dont pick one of us now we will all be killed!" Xajita shouted Xajita tried to attack Xel but obviously got hurt.. "Jordie we need to be one..." She whispered in Jordie's ear after wiping the blood off her arm "But how?" She asked quietly and slowly "Like i said...Zorx.." She sighed "It will take him a while..." Jordie looked at Xajita "I know...thats why we have to stall" Jordie nodded

    "He has done stupid things like that before...and has paid the problems...Im sure he wont" Although Xander wasint too sure... He watched the two girls talk quietly "We cant let Zorx pick one of those girls to stay with him! Or else they will be one and thats not too good.." He sighed
     
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    Ooc: Bah! Did I miss anything important?!
     
  18. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    OOC: Well you did miss this on page 30 Larxene~Miss Antenne2~.
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    IC: Zorx turned around and looked at Xel with blazing fire in his eyes as he pulled his blade out. Zorx didn't move as the fire whip went past his left cheek, Zorx just smirked as he pointed at Jordie "You guys wanted me to choose who I care for the most, well isn't that a shame, I pointed to Jordie, well what now?" Zorx said in a calm voice. Xel just grinned as he pulled his head up but his eyes locked on Xajita "You just don't get to pick Zorx, we get to kill the one you don't care for." Xel said in a menacing voice as he pulled his fire whip back to him, once he had it back, its form changed from a curved whip to a hard metal sword that kept fire on itself. Zorx put his finger down and stood in front of Xajita and Jordie "You two need to run, because if these guys find you both then they'll kill you, no matter if you have a heart." Zorx whispered as he went into his fighting stance.
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    "Simply perfect, Zorx versus Xel, a powerful match-up between Twilight and Fire, marvelous isn't it Xander?" Carex said as he looked at the two who were ready for battle. Xarken soon opened a portal to Carex and Xander, once there he soon stood on his feet, breathing heavy, "Well if it isn't our betrayer." Carex said as he used cure on Xarken "You don't have to learn why I'm doing this...It is because I'm like a Judge and an Executioner to these people, if we wore armor then we would be true Judges to the people." Xarken said as Carex soon put his Axe up to Xarken's neck "Now what have I told you about that true reasoning Xarken we are not savages in our battles, we are masters of true purpose in this world, trying to save ourselves from darkness." Carex said as he put his blade up and watched Xel and Zorx battle.
     
  19. Larxene~Miss Antenne2~ Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Ooc: ... ah.. okay. I'll reply to that. I think I was going to, then my computer shut off ><...
     
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    OOC: good to hear... now when?