Organization's XIII *Retry*

Discussion in 'Retirement Home' started by Hell Kaiser Ryo, Apr 22, 2007.

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How well is the Rp?

  1. Awesome

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  2. Super

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  3. Cool

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  4. Great

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  5. Boo!

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  6. Stupid

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  7. Crap!

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  8. I HATE IT!

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    [Comatose by Skillet plays]Xane soon reappeared behind Xana sticking his blade through her chest and hand then whispering the last words in her ear "Now am I worthless Xana?". Xane soon teleported out of there, leaving his blade inside her chest.[Song will end after Larxene~Miss Antenne2~ posts]
     
  2. Larxene~Miss Antenne2~ Merlin's Housekeeper

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    (She's right against the wall and sitting there. So... yeah.. how can he appear behind her if there's no room to? XD. I'll just go along with it anyways)

    Xana fell frontward, pushing the blade out. She rapidly choughed up blood, then fell to the floor and grasped it. "I'm going to die.. I don't want to die... not today.." She whispered to herself, tears streaming down her face. [Keep holding on plays] A hand gently wrapped around Xana's pulling her up. Xirkai smiled and put her arm around her. "Would Xaren want you to die without a dignity, or would he want you to fight and die with pride?" She asked slyly. Xana was silent. "Xaren isn't here. I can't bring him back. But He'd want me to fight and die with pride.." She said softley, looking up sternly. "Lets go." She said, opening a corrider of darkness and walking firml;y through it, Xirkai behind her. [Song ends]
     
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    Xane was now waiting on a rock in Atlantica seeing Xana and the other one from the room "So you came to fight me after all?" Xane asked with a smirk. Xane jumped off the rock, ten feet away from the two "You two better give me a fight it's no fun being the only one who is giving the beating." Xane said, tilting with a glance in his eye. Xane then brought out another blade of his, only not just one blade but two, one of Light and one of Darkness held within.
     
  4. Larxene~Miss Antenne2~ Merlin's Housekeeper

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    "Oh shut up... Pansy.." Xana teased, grinning. She knocked rapidly into wall then rock and back and forth without even moving her hand. "Man, Is it opposite. You're like tissue!" Xirkai laughed at Xane's pain as he went back and forth being hit into a hard rock and a wall with onyl a flick of Xana's finger.
     
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    Xane just smiled as he vanished but not by black smoke, by relentless power, Xane soon came behind Xana and twapped her in the head with his feet, then kicked her in the stomach, and last he stabbed her in her chest. "Ohhh..." Xane whispered "So hard to die by my hands, that you could only dream of having a heart to be with... but that dream...dies in the end." Xane inquired as he lifted his blades up through her chest all the way through her head.[In the End by Linkin' Park plays] "You better learn that people with a darkened heart, can never win, and a power can never be held by such a weak person." Xane finished, as he teleported to a distant world. [song fades]
     
  6. Larxene~Miss Antenne2~ Merlin's Housekeeper

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    (Does that mean Xana's dead? I can't tell.)

    Xirkai store with horror as Xana laid over on a rock, loosing blood rapidly. "Oh crap oh crap oh crap.." She whimpered, raising her hand. "Heal" She commanded.Healing bells clung over Xana. Nothing happend. "Heal" She commanded again. Nothing happend.

    20 heals later

    "Heal Heal Heal Heal!" She commanded rapidly, running out of mp. "Shoot.. stupid mp..." She grumbled, looking down at Xana. "....Xana?" She asked quietly, inching closer.
     
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    "She's dead, but not forgotten..." a slow moving voice said around Xirkai "She may be well prepared around the after-life, but she is now free of despair and anguish in this life, Xaren and she will be reborn, not knowing what lies in the darkness of the light." the voice said as a small light showed around Xirkai and a man with red flames as hair showed himself.
     
  8. Larxene~Miss Antenne2~ Merlin's Housekeeper

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    "Woah, dude... your hair is on fire.. and we're like... underwater.... you know? That breaks the frickin' laws of nature yo!" Xirkai exclaimed, pointing at his hair. Sparks began rising from Xana. [It Ends Tonight by All American Rejects plays]. Xirkai looked at her and pounced ontop of Xana, whom only turned into sparks and streaks of black as she faded away. "No.." She whispered, swimming back up and staring up at the rock where Xana used to be.
     
  9. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    Xajita sighed. She knew what was coming for her "Just get it over with..." Xajita said to him "Just kill me....right now i want to die!" She shouted....
    There was an echo that came from her voice. Xajita looked at the guy "Just because i have a heart...you know having a heart isint everything!!!!!" She said to him

    ~ Meanwhile ~
    "Zorx..." Jordie mumbled but shook her head "Yeah! This will be awsome!" She smiled but deep inside she was worried 'Who is she and...what isint Zorx telling me...Awww im scared...' Jordie sighed a little "Anyways...Lets go then.." She said to Zorx "I guess..." She mumbled under her breath. 'I will have to find out no matter what!!' Jordie thought and walked with Zorx
     
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    "I know how hard it is to lose someone you care about... but the only way to lose someone is to gain someone." the man said "My name is Xel... I'm know as The Fire Lord, because of my hair, my weapon is a whip, and my element is fire." Xel introduced as he turned back into pure light swirling around Xirkai. "Well... Xirkai, the man who killed Xana was indeed one of the elemental lords, as I should have expected, by the way," Xel went inside Xirkai "His name is Xane The Twilight Moon, his weapon is an Axe, element Twilight, his accomplice is Carex The Demon's Dark, weapon the twilight blades as you've just seen, and his element is the Dark." Xel proclaimed as he opened a portal of light to his hideout (Destiny Islands).
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    "Are you sure Xajita?" Carex asked as he put his weapon away "I would never hurt an unarmed opponent, even if I could." Carex said as he walked over to Xajita but stopped when sparks started to shift around him. "I'm sorry that I can't stop and wait for anyone but I'm not that type of person who can't live without killing, it's in my nature as an Elemental Lord." Carex said as he sat on the ground.
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    Zorx looked at Jordie as the guilt was starting to kill him "Ok Jordie she's not just someone I know," Zorx stopped in his tracks "She's a person i kissed before I knew it, I had feelings for her, now I'm all mixed up." Zorx said as he kneeled on the ground holding his ears.
     
  11. Larxene~Miss Antenne2~ Merlin's Housekeeper

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    (Im gonna do a cool non-existant-no one else can see it-death-scene)

    [Nobody's home by Avril Lavigne plays]Xana woke up in pitch dark. "Wha? Xirkai...? Xaren? ... Anyone? Where am I?" She questioned nothing, looking up. She ran out, but slammd into a black wall. EVerything was black. It looked endless. She whimpered and sat down, curling her knees up and putting her hands on her head. "I wanna go home.." She said softley.
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    [song fades] Xirkai Clenched her fists. "He's dead meat... But I'll be it first..." She whimpered, thinking of attempting to fight Xane. She shivered at the thought, turning away and swimming into a portal to Wonderland.
     
  12. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    Jordie tried to keep calm although she was heartbroken "Uhh....Enough about that just come on...." You could tell she was a little upset although she didnt admit it. Meanwhile Dean had been spying on them "God Zorx... You shouldint of told her so late...not now she has feelings for you..." He whispered and walked back to Krystal "What were they talking about..." Krystal asked as Dean sat back down "I think Jordie officially has feelings for him although now she is heartbroken.." He replied but stopped when Jordie walked in the room "Did you say my name Dean?" She asked "Uhh...no no!" Dean said nervously

    ~ Twilight Town ~

    "Look i dont have time for this....weird events have been happening and..." Xajita heard Zorx's Voice again She's a person i kissed before I knew it, I had feelings for her, now I'm all mixed up. "Why do i keep hearing his voice...wait did he just..." Xajita stopped when she saw Carex looking at her "Umm...never mind about that.." She sighed
     
  13. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    Zorx soon walked away from the Jordie and the others, as he walked into town, everyone he saw, they turned their backs against him. I can't believe what I just did. Zorx thought as he heard thunder clash in the sky and lightning rumble, as rain began to pour, and everyone in the streets went inside their homes. Zorx was then seeing himself in the water that was filling on the ground. "Ohhhhh Goddddd!" Zorx yelled so loud that the whole universe could hear it, as he kept slamming his fist into the ground as hard as he could making it become bloody with rage and torture as his threw off both his eyepatch and sun-glasses into a puddle as he cried his heart out, still pounding the ground with his right fist.
     
  14. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    When Jordie heard the yell she went outside and looked for Zorx when she finally found town, After going around in circles a couple of time, she saw Zorx "Zorx..." She ran to the back of him and hugged him "What are you doing!!" Jordie shouted, still hugging him "If its about what you told me its alright really!! Just stop hurting yourself..." Drops of water were on her check she wasint sure if it was tears or just the rain. Right now she didnt care... "Zorx i will always care for you no matter what! Dont you remember our promise?! We will stick together until the end! If you hurt yourself now we wont be able too!!" She closed her eyes as she said this "Zorx please...." Now she knew she was crying... But she wanted to pretend it was just rain drops...she didnt want Zorx to think he had hurt her more....
     
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    Zorx stopped pounding the ground and let his tears fall to the ground as he panted "I'm sorry Jordie." Zorx quivered as he kept letting tears of pain and joy fall from his eyes as blood fell from his hand. "Jordie... I'm sorry for everything i've done to every world I've been to.." Zorx had held her hand as he blood fell on hers as well. "Jordie.." Zorx got up on his knees as he pulled Jordie's hands off his waist and turned around to her as he pulled her lips into his own.

    [This goes with this part [​IMG]Kingdom Hearts - Falling Inside The Black]
     
  16. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    Jordie hesitated for a second but held onto him as they kissed. She closed her eyes as everything became dizzy. It felt like time has stopped around them 'Love is so strong...' she thought smiling. When they let go her cheeks were flushing "Zorx.." Jordie smiled at him "I forgive you" She hugged him...
    Dean and Krystal were watching them. They both laughed quietly "Told ya.." Dean whispered to Krystal. Krystal just smiled "We better go off somewhere before they see us..." Krystal walked off and so did Dean
    "So what do think is going to happen next?" Krystal asked Dean "I dunno....Probably meet the guy Zorx mentioned..." Dean replied "Yeah maybe..." Krystal sighed "Whats wrong?" Dean asked her "I miss Jordie..."Krystal looked at Dean "What do you mean she is...Oh yeah.." He looked away "Ever since Jordie met Zorx shes been weird.." Krystal looked down "Hey dont worry im sure its just everything thats been happening not Zorx...I mean hes a god guy right...he wouldint take Jordie from us...im sure of it.." Dean looked at Krystal "Dont worry about it..."
     
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    "Are you sure?" a raspy voice with a forked tounge said as he pulled out a blade. "Make sure that you can trust that friend of yours, he's more slipperier than any man I've met." the raspy voice said as it vanished.
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    "Jordie..." Zorx had a gut feeling that something would happen in the next minute or so. Zorx kept holding Jordie as a voice started to talk in his head Kill her now, Kill her now, Kiiiilllllll heeerrr nowww! Zorx soon pulled Jordie away as he stood up, holding his head as small yells came out of his mouth, as they got louder and longer, his nails grew longer, sharper and harder, his hair became longer, and as both his eyes became the same with the symbol but more a darker crimson. "Jordie forgive me." Zorx said as he ran away from her.
     
  18. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    "Z-zorx?" Jordie was freaked out now "Zorx wait!!" She shouted but soon gave up after the 3rd time. As the rain fell on her she looked down "One kiss...one heartbroken...." Jordie saw her reflection in the water... Rain drops and tears were falling into it....She wasint sure if the most water was her tears or just the rain "Why does my heart always fall in traps...?" She questioned herself
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    "Hey is that--" Krystal was about to ask Dean if that was Zorx running towards them but He had already past "Hey Zorx!" Dean shouted "Oh no..." He had saw Zorx's changes " Krystal go see if Jordie is okay...I will chase after Zorx" The two split up and went different ways
    When Krystal reached Jordie she sighed in relief "Thank god your oka-- Jordie?" She saw Jordie's tears on her cheeks "Aww...Jordie!!" Krystal ran over to her "W-what did i do wrong? is he okay? Krystal i dont know!!" She knelled down to the water "Jordie please dont hurt yourself" Krystal looked at Jordie but she didnt move...
    "He was the only *sniff* one i loved!" Jordie whispered but Krystal heard "Oh Jordie!" She sighed

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    "Hey Zorx Wait up!!" Dean finally caught up with Zorx "What have you done to Jordie?!? What is wrong with you Zorx! SHE LOVES YOU!" Dean stood in front of Zorx so he wouldint run away "Maybe we were wrong about you..." He looked away
     
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    Zorx looked at Dean then at his own reflection in the puddle of water "Dean... I didn't want anyone to see who I am... not what I wanted people to find me as I look." Zorx said as he turned back to where he came from, Zorx soon walked back to where Jordie was after saying to Dean "Do you love Krystal... or even like her?... if you do, don't let her go.". Zorx then came and saw Jordie knelled on the ground, Zorx sighed as he walked over to Jordie, but was pushed back by Krystal who bad mouthed him about what he did to Jordie "I didn't do anything to her Krystal!" Zorx yelled as his anger got the better of him, he soon put his sharpened nails in her arms as he made them bleed, and threw her to his right, into a wall.
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  20. Larxene~Miss Antenne2~ Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Xirkai entered Wonderland, looking around. She stood there for a second, than collasped and sat up. "Why am I here again?" She asked no one, scratching her head and thinking why she came.

    (Wow, like, really short post.