Organization XIII's Rivals

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  1. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: I'm not sure how I could get that in either.
     
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    Gwyxn grabbed the Coke, opened it, and took a sip. "Thanks. I needed some caffiene..."

    OOC: No, I love the element thingy...I just don't think it'd do much for meh...seeing as everyone's kind of like...emotionless. I suppose she could be able to generate fake emotions or something.... ^^;
     
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  5. OOC: Well, let's just say Larxene steps in, and Xinaram sends for Xangel's help or whatever, all talk for a little while, and then we move to our separate fights, concentrating simply on ours. The Corridor Of Darkness is big, after all.

    As for the fight scene, is coming, I just need time to wrack my brain for something. Is hard xP.
     
  6. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: *Waits paitiently*
     
  7. OOC: Sorry ^_^; I've never done fight scenes before. You killed me on that. I didn't know there were so much words for fire until this. Stay clear, long read.

    Axel winced at the attacks, over and over again. His body was slowly growing in pain, but he wasn't about to be rid of that easily.

    He grunted at another blow, taking him from his thoughts, He let her put more attacks into him, while he build up his fire within. He felt it flowing to his fingers, down his arms, in his spine, in his face, everywhere, and he was enamouring a sense of heat, his body burning like an erupting volcano.

    And that's what happened.

    In a sudden explosion of fire, rapid flames shot up, directly impacting Xinaram's whole body as he joyfully saw, and sending the girl flying up at the force of the burns and pain that was out-of-control fire. The blaze didn't stop, and continued to grow still hitting Xinaram in mid-air as she tried to take control. Before she could though, gripping his chakrams tight, he swung his legs forward, and crouching down on the sea floor full of inferno, taking the momentum, he leaped unto the air towards her, looking like some type of human rocket, his weapons setting ablaze as he went for the attack.

    Axel didn't know what went wrong with him, but he found himself smashing her hard, slashing his pointy shards around his chakrams into her mercilessly, back and forth, up and down, feeling the hot searing metal, because of the fire around it, digging into her skin, and ripping up her cloak. To keep up, he used her body for support. He could barely hear her moans and groans of pains, as he hacked and injured, for seconds on end. Finally having enough, he slammed one chakram into her face, sending her straight down into the aflame fire.

    He came down fast, and his feet finally touched the ground. He stopped then, taking deep breaths and gasps, finding her unmoving, and he extinguished his flames from around. She did look messed up...but she was sure to get up, right?

    Axel looked guiltily at her body, but when he spoke, his voice was blank. "No, I'm not enjoying this..."
     
  8. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Xinaram lied on the ground, she could hardly open her eyes, she was burned and injured all over, her coat was torn to shreds, blood seeped from the places where her body had been struck by his chakrams. She tried to lift her body off of the ground, her arms were shaking. under her very heavy breath, she said, "I guess... I lied..." Her unsteady arms gave in, and she fell back to the ground, unconsious.

    OOC: I LOVED that last post. Wow. Awesome. Amazing.
    I really love sad scenes in which people end up bleeding. I don't know why, xD.
     
  9. OOC: *comes back from resting her head* Thanks! :) Thinking this over gave me a headache. For real. I'm glad I did good.

    Axel resummoned his chakrams, and they disappeared in a swirl of darkness and flames. For some reason, he somehow felt like the enemy in the end of all this. He didn't really think he was hitting that hard, he just sometimes gets lost when fighting. He looked away, a shadowed feeling of regret taking over him. This was usually Larxene's way of doing things, though he knew he could get just as carried away as her.

    Well, he got what he wanted. The conclusion wasn't what he expected, however.

    Giving a sigh, his eyes turned over Xinaram's unconscious body, and hesitating, he slowly walked over to it. Bending down, he checked her pulse, and found out she was still breathing. And she wasn't fading away. Good.

    Taking her into his arms, not really knowing what to do from now, he carried her bridal style. The meeting must be over by now. Heh.

    Not that it matters anymore. He didn't have a Cure bottle with him, and this one need an infirmary fast.
     
  10. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: *Cannot post IC Because her character is unconscious*xD
    I had to look up what "infirmary" meant in the dictionary.

    And,
    Didn't you mean "desummoned"?
     
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    OOC: Yeah, you did awesome *TwilightNight*! :) Although I don't know why you wanted to check for Xinram's pulse if she has no heart...

    "You did a great job, Axel," Larxene remarked, walking over to him, her footsteps echoing slightly on the metal flooring. She had watched the whole fight from afar, and she was quite impressed by how hard he had hit the girl. He was so much like a different person, that it had shocked and amazed her at the same time.
    "I never thought you'd have it in you to actually keep on hitting when her when she was already down," she continued, a smile playing across her lips. "Of course, it's always a pleasure to hear someone's cries and screams of their pain and agony. It's just too bad I couldn't be the cause of it."
    Seeing how he was carrying the girl so tenderly, she quickly crossed her arms - whether this meant she was irritated, upset, or it was simply one of her idiosyncrasies, wasn't quite visible.
    "Looking for a way to heal her, hmm?" she said, eyeing them coolly, her tone of voice even and enigmatic. "Whatever for, Axel? You do know she's our enemy, right?"
     
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    OOC: I'm guessing the heart as in the internal organ, because one wouldn't be able to live with out it. xD
     
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    OOC: Hm...that Nobody-no-heart-thing is really confusing me now. XDD Anyway, today, I'm really bored, so be careful of my super-long posts tonight!
     
  14. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: xD It used to confuse me too.

    Uh-Oh, looks like I'm going to have to do some reading tomorrow! =O
     
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    OOC: I still don't really get it. lol Anyway, hope it's interesting enough for you to bear! XD By the way, how good am I doing so far, just wondering?
     
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    OOC: Your all doing really good. No n00bs! =D xD
     
  17. OOC: I don't know about the re-summoned thing. I was on a roll, and rarely checked for grammar. For that pulse thing, I didn't think well of it when writing, so let's just pretend it was some kind of typical human reaction, from when he had a heart. It was only to check her breathing, not her pulse, thoughm, I think.

    And yeah, no n00bs xP. This is a good RP though.


    Axel provided a glare to Larxene, though her behavior was expected, so he shrugged it off. Once you get used to the Apathetic Princess, it was as normal as the plainest weather. "Even though she is our enemy, she's still young, Larxene. She looks Roxas' age. And though she did spy, checked our castle, she didn't do nothing so wrong to get this type of punishment. The whole thing was to make a distraction. I made sure when I came here I would win, and if it was a death battle, that I will be the one still breathing. But I didn't like the way I lost control. I guess all the negative thinking that I held for her took me in that moment. And is not like she initiated the fights, I did."

    He stared at Larxene, his green eyes softening, but mocking, a smirk filling his face. "Nothing to be jealous of, Lar-Lar. You're still my favorite girl. I feel some type of regret, of a memory, I guess, but I still have great dislike for this mouse. I'm going to keep her here, where she could recuperate, and then we might get some answers from her once she's back in focus. Maybe we should report to Xemnas now, as you were also missing, it seems. Glad you enjoyed the battle. I was awesome, wasn't I?"

    Here, Axel's smirk turned into a grin. "Got it memorized?"
     
  18. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Larxene tilted her head up, giving him an almost haughty glance. "Hmph, you might've done well, I admit," she said, "but I probably could've done better. I wouldn't have stopped so quickly if I were you...but anyway..." She uncrossed her arms and glanced at the girl. "As you said, we really ought to see how much this girl knows...not to mention, we ought to see what we missed out on Xemnas's big scheme."
    Turning, she paused for a moment, before adding, "Oh, and don't call me 'Lar-Lar', Ax."


    OOC: Yeah, it really is a good RPG. Although we really shouldn't underestimate the power of n00bs! lol
     
  19. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC:LOL. The power of n00bs. like the power of nagging and begging, and spamming. xD
     
  20. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    OOC: Haha, well, don't forget we were all n00bs once. lol
     
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