Chapter 2! Larmuia ran. The heartless were invading. His friend, Josef was running too. There was a massive hole in the wall of the castle. "No. Gavlar castle must not be harmed." Josef said. And he jumped in the hole. "Josef, no!" Larmuia sighed. Every time, he always had to investigate everything. And he ran after Josef. There were trees, and they were very high. Josef was on a high platform, with some big scythe-like weapon. He was fighting a behemoth heartless..he slashed, but it jumped up, and sent a shockwave through the ground, sending Josef fall. He landed on the ground, the scythe hitting the ground with a SMASH! But the scythe didn't break. But what was the smash? Josef was injured, and Larmuia ran over to him. "Josef, no! Cure!" Larmuia shouted as Josef woke up. He was hurt, but in the end, he would be fine. Larmuia grabbed the scythe and attacked the behemoth, up on the platform. Slash, slash!!! Larmuia was using all of his strength until....a heartless attacked him from the back. A heart flew up to the sky. A black creature ran off. "Ugh.." Josef said as he watched what had just happened. He wanted to help Larmuia, but the heartless were coming. He cast a cura spell on himself, and ran. Lexaeus walked through the streets of the world that never was. Here he was: Memory's skyscraper. A man with pink hair stood up. Lexaeus ran over to him, and helped him up. He felt the presence of a Nobody.. "What is your name, denizen of the dark?" "I am.....Larmuia." He stumbled, but got back up. The word Larmuia popped up in front of him. The words spun around Larmuia, feeling his presence. They stopped! And the word 'Marluia' came up. And BAM! an X was inserted. His new name was 'Marluxia'. "Your new name is Marluxia. Come with me." And they walked to the castle.
Ah, Marluxia this time. Well ok. But again, you rush a bit too much on things. Maybe you should make a story for each member and how they turned into a nobody? But that would actually take too much time. Unless the rushing and making the stories short is part of the plan Descriptions are still good by the way.
Sorry if it was rushed:o I'm making stories for all of the org down to sai'x and then there will be one combined story for Ansem's apprentices.
