Organization Misfits V

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  1. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    All right. Like?
     
  2. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    Let's let fate decide. The end is close but not as close as you suspect.
     
  3. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    That has been done.
     
  4. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    You know patience IS a virtue, is it not?
     
  5. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    That don't see how that makes it a valid point.
     
  6. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    That would make two questionable points.
     
  7. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Now you just lost me.
     
  8. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    I have that affect on people. Remind me never to go to forests, I already feel sorry for any of those who I would happen to meet.
     
  9. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    But back to the topic, what would be original to do to heroes?
     
  10. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    My, someone has no patience. Just do anything non Mary-sue or chiche. Maybe a desue-ifier in there for character development.
     
  11. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    There's a list of them, dude.
     
  12. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    *sigh* society imposes such stupid ideas. Poor B, they've closed you mind.

    Just a little mary-sue for spice, a little brainstorming, and a whole load of trashed ideas. We're trying to bake up a batch of originality, not a 13 year old's fanfic.
     
  13. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Okay name 13 original ideas like this.

    Putting them like this:

    would help.
     
  14. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    Quite simply I cannot. You want me to make origional ideas out of nowhere? I don't even have a main theme or characters.
     
  15. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Alright. The story takes place in a world that is firmly on the cynical end of the Sliding Scale Of Idealism Versus Cynicism and is filled with both physical and moral decay. The villain is a well intentioned extremist (kind of like Light but not as big of a jacka**) who rules the world. And the main heroes are a rag tag team of misfits consisting of an Anti-Hero (the protagonist), a shot-gun using Sociopath (who enjoys killing things for no reason other then it's fun), a guy who is insane and enjoys it, an "ax crazy" woman who is psychologically unstable and presents a clear danger to others and is also mute and has a sinister smile all the time, and an idealist that has no fighting skills or skills at all and the only reason he is on the team is to be a meat shield.
     
  16. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    Come one, we can't be a little more origional than that?
     
  17. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Oh right?! How mant stories have that for a plot?!
     
  18. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    World is rotting, some moron is in charge of the world, and a band of misfits must take him down? You must have never played and RPG in your life. That is not my problem though. A game can have a plot that doesn't involve some mass evil trying somethign stupid, but it is most common to have that form of plot.
    Can you spot anything else in that description that I can throw the terms Cliche and Mary-sue at?
     
  19. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    I never said they were going to take him down. And there not cliches.
     
  20. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    If you don't think so go right ahead with it.
     
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