Organization Holidays p.1- Valentines day

I'm starting with Valentines day because I have a crazy mind. Warning: This part contains a little Yaoi. What can I say, I'm hyper.

The Hour of Horror
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Larxene rolled out of her bed, slamming down on her hardwood flooring. "Ow.. D****t.." She cursed, getting up. Her cloak was already on, but she still had things to do to prepare for the day. She sighed and trotted over to her dresser and picked up her brush and brushing her hair out. She ahse did she wandered over to her calander on the wall to see whome she tortured today.

Sunday(Valentines day isn't on Sunday, but I'm doing it to fit this). There was nothing written. "Huh.." She said, peering closer at it. In the little corner, inprinted in tiny print, read "Valentines Day." Larxene froze. She whined and smashed her fist in the wall, sighing. "I hate Valentines day.." She mumbled as the organization was summoned to the throne room.

Larxene sat in her chair, bored and watching others sitting anxiously in their seats. "Gentlemen, and one lady!" Xemnas announced. Everyone, except Larxene of course, snickered. "As you may know, it is a tradition for us to have a week's worth of Valentines day. Whom ever hasn't... er... done whatever you young uns' do by the end of the weeks has to do all chores for a month.

The organizaion was silent. Some grinned, others had a O.O face. "Roxas will not be included due to last time's 'inci-" Xemnas started, then Roxas jumped up on his chair and shouted "WOO HOO!" He grinned confidently and sat back down. "Uh.. right... usual rules apply. No doubles, but cheating is aloud, just because it's fun to watch people wither in misery" He finished. "Competition starts in..." Xigbar said. Everybody started counting down from 10.

10!
9!
8!
7!
6!
5!
4!
3!
2!
1!!

Just then a new hour struck. A horn went off at the new hour, which Demyx had done every Valentine's day, and everyone scrambled away from the throne room.

"I wonder who's gonna attempt and winning me over first.." Larxene grumbled, striding down one of the castle's corridors. Her arms were crossed, and the quietness made everything suspicious. A scream broke the silence as Larxene was tackle hugged from behind by Xigbar. "Heeeey sugarcakes!" He cooed. "Xigbar, get off of me and don't ever call me sugar cakes again unless you want to be pernamatly blind." The Savage Nymph threatend. He immiedietly stood up, his face sucked in and frozen with fright. He screamed and ran off as Larxene stood up, cackling evily.

Marluxia watched from around the corner. He had a plan, and Pinky was determined about it. "My plan is foolproof. It will work!" He said, cackling evily and scurrying off to find what he needed for his plan. He passed Demyx, whom was sitting on a couch and playing a gamecube. "Aren't you worried you won't get a date, Demmy?" He said, stopping and poking Demyx in the back of the head. "Not really. If I have to do the chores, I can just make my water clones do them." He said, his eyes still on the TV. Mrluxia stopped for a second, then turned and walked out of the den "Whatever, waterboy" He said.

As Larxene came up to her bedroom door, there was a basket and a note on it. She sighed and picked the note up, reading it. "Dear Larxene, with a voice like a dove! I am so entranced by this feeling of love! You've stolen my heart cause you're just so sweet. So I stole the hearts of ten folks on the street! Happy Valentines Day, see you soon!" She read aloud. She peeked down at the basket. An eerie smell arose from it. She felt nausea just by thinking of it, and thus she picked up the basket and threw it into a corridor of darkness, shuddering and walking away in horror.
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Okay, maybe not Yaoi, but later in different Sections of Part 1.

 

wow, i loved the first chapter, cant wait for another

 

It's good, but I think you should pump up the description some more... Ya know... Help make the whole thing a lot more vivid....

That's all I got...

*still feels sick*