Org. XIII's Famous Last Words: Roxas

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  1. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    I got sorta bored, so I decided to make these short story things, where, if I wrote how the organization memebers died, this is how it'd go. Each goes with a song :) I'm not sure if i should continue these. Please let me know if I should, okay? :D

    ~Roxas' Famous Last Words~

    Now I know

    Roxas walked the cold streets of The World That Never Was. His feet splashed through puddles; the marks left behind from the heavy rain shower that had happened such a little time ago. He was walking, and he wouldn’t turn back. He wanted something…

    Completion…

    He needed it. To fill the emptiness…

    That I can’t make you stay

    “Your mind’s made up?â€

    But where’s your heart?

    It was Axel. Roxas smiled softly. Getting past him wouldn’t be hard. After all, he got past everyone else, right? But he was ready. He was ready to give up everything to seek what he desired…

    Answers…

    Completion…

    Even his friendship with Axel. He had decided.

    But where’s your heart?

    It’d be hard, but he had decided.

    “Why did the Keyblade choose me? I have to know.†Roxas stated, strongly. He was walking, and he wouldn’t turn back. He wanted to know. He wanted to meet someone…Sora…

    But where’s your…

    “Roxas!â€

    And I know

    Roxas turned his head towards Axel. He looked angry, frustrated. Roxas smirked. Too bad he couldn’t feel it.
    “You can’t turn on the Organization!†Axel shouted, desperate.

    There’s nothing I can say
    To change that part


    “Watch me.†Roxas replied coldly. He wouldn’t let Axel stop him. Sora was waiting. He needed to know. He needed answers. Axel would understand.

    To change that part
    To change…


    “Roxas, think! You can’t leave!†Axel retorted. He gazed at Roxas with pleading eyes.

    So many
    Bright lights that cast a shadow
    But can I speak?


    “Why not?†Roxas said. There was nothing Axel could say that’d change his mind. He felt…incomplete…and Sora would know why. He was walking, and he wouldn’t turn back.

    Well is it hard understanding
    I'm incomplete
    A life that's so demanding


    “You get on their bad side, and they’ll destroy you!†Axel yelled. Roxas chuckled to himself. Such a…weak argument.

    I get so weak

    He knew the answer to this.

    A love that’s so demanding

    “No one would miss me.†He said softly, his ice-cold words burning his own tongue.

    I can’t speak

    “That’s not true!†Axel yelled. Roxas walked away, uncaring. Axel lowered his head in defeat. Roxas was walking, and he couldn’t stop him.

    I am not afraid to keep on living
    I am not afraid to walk this world alone
    Honey if you stay, I'll be forgiven
    Nothing you can say can stop me going home


    “I would…â€

    +++

    The memories came flooding back. Axel didn’t want him to leave. They were…

    I see you lying next to me
    With words I thought I’d never speak


    They had been…

    Awake, and unafraid
    Asleep, or dead


    Best Friends…

    I am not afraid to keep on living
    I am not afraid to walk this world alone


    “Axel.†He called softly. He had so much to say. He had hurt Axel. He hadn’t cared about him. He had so much to say, so much to say…

    Honey if you stay, I'll be forgiven
    Nothing you can say can stop me going home


    Axel looked up at Roxas. His eyes radiated kindness…

    I am not afraid to keep on living

    …And forgiveness…

    I am not afraid to walk this world alone

    “Let’s meet again in the next life.†Axel said catching his breath. Roxas smiled softly.

    Maybe…they could still be friends?

    “Yeah, I’ll be waiting.†Roxas said graciously. Axel smiled deviously, darkness creeping up around him. Roxas’ eyes got wide in fear. Axel chuckled.
    “Silly,†he said, the darkness beginning to claim him. “Just because you have a next life…â€
    He disappeared.
    Vanished, swallowed in the darkness.
    Had Axel…died?
    A wave of pain, regret, and sorrow washed over him.
    He was gone.
    Roxas wanted to close his eyes and disappear with him. But he couldn’t.

    ‘Sora…’

    He still had to meet him. He needed to feel…complete…

    Roxas shook his head. He had left Axel to meet Sora. He had hurt Axel to meet Sora. Now, he could go. Axel would forgive him. He wouldn’t want him to fade back into darkness. They’d meet again, in the next life.

    Like promised.

    He was walking, and he wouldn’t turn back.

    He was walking, for the last time…

    Honey if you stay I’ll be forgiven
    Nothing you can say can stop me going home


    +++

    Roxas looked at Sora. Brown hair, blue eyes. Nothing special.
    He shrugged to himself.
    This was it.
    This was it.
    There’d be no turning back after this. He was reluctant at first, but he had decided to do it.

    It’ be hard, but he had decided.

    This…was it…

    Roxas smiled bravely.

    “Look sharp!†he shouted to the inattentive Sora. Sora whipped around to meet his gaze. Roxas closed his eyes.

    I am not afraid to keep on living

    He felt himself leave, he felt himself fade into Sora.

    I am not afraid to walk this world alone

    He was no longer himself, no longer there. He was part of Sora now.

    He could hear a distant voice.

    €œRoxas!â€

    Axel.

    The next life…as Sora…

    Roxas smiled.
    Sora smiled too.

    He was forgiven. He was…

    Honey if you stay I’ll be forgiven

    …Complete…

    Nothing you can say can stop me going home

    Song: Famous Last Words
    By: My Chemical Romance

    So whatcha think? Should I keep making these? Or should I just trash the idea?
     
  2. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I think you should keep at making them!

    That was awesome. It was sad and stuff but really fun to read. I remember all of the scenes and you connected them!

    great job!


    FIRST POSTNESS!
     
  3. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    thanks! :D (I memorized all of the lines :D)

    Stalking the boards, arent we? lol :D So am i
     
  4. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    There isn't much else to do...

    it's a nice pass time though :)
     
  5. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    heh, i know what cha mean :)
     
  6. Black Sinner Twilight Town Denizen

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    It's a pretty good one-shot. If I thought you could (and you probably could), I would want you to keep writing more of it.

    *sigh* MY COMPUTER WON'T LET ME READ THE FIRST CHAPTER OF YOUR FOURTEENTH KEY STORY! *cries uncontrollaby* IT'S NOT FAIR!!!
     
  7. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    thanks! :D

    ur kidding me? That stinks! *goes to check if something is wrong*
     
  8. bluemoonlightgirl Merlin's Housekeeper

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    That was very well written. And on top of it all, you wrote them as friends. Thank you! I can never find a decent story with the two of them as friends and not lovers. It was sad, but really good. And yes, write more! Please? :)
     
  9. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank you! And I absoultely hate it when people write them off as lovers.

    As Axel's # 1 fangirl, it's my job to brick those who do that, so I can have him to myself *evil smile*

    I hope to make more, but right now I'm in the midst of my The 14th Key story. I'll finish that (today?) and then I'll make more of these :D
     
  10. >Keyblader< Traverse Town Homebody

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    Very nice. The friendship between them was shown to be very strong indeed........... Keep writing!!! MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHHAH!!!!!
    Just joking.
     
  11. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    I like this one.
    It is good written and you placed the song very good in the story.
    I think you should keep making these, this one was good :)
    Good job!.
     
  12. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thats was very good. You tied the song and the scenes together wonderful... Plus I <3 that song! :D Write more... best of luck, cause it sounds hard to tie a whole song into them each fading away






    Ever thinking of making a video to go along with it?
     
  13. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    Good as always
     
  14. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank you, all of you! :D I hope to make more :D

    And I've thought of making a vid, but never really got around to it...

    *kicks lazy self*
     
  15. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    What're you doing? Laziness is to be embraced look at me, pretentious, pompous and I don't know what the words I use mean!
     
  16. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    lol ok then :) *embraces inner lazieness*
     
  17. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    Yeah! Go lazy future failures of the world! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! <_<

    >_>

    <_<

    I gotta stop doing that
     
  18. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Lazy people of the world...UNITE!!!

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    Okay, unite TOMORROW cuz i don't feel like doing it today XD