Open Your Heart

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  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    First of all, I wrote this out of boredom, so sorry if you don´t like it:

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    I see chaos and confusion
    Going around this world
    So much senseless wars
    So much dead, no meaning at all

    I can see corruption going around all
    Just dead, just hopeless sadness and anger
    So much things are blazing in rage
    Nothing happy at all

    The entire world may break apart
    But my hopes I will not give up
    Life is not a closed book, is open
    So don´t close yourself now

    Everything can be maked again
    Just start from a scratch
    But life is not easy
    You have to fight for it

    You think life is better for everyone
    You are wrong, for everyone is hard
    You think hurting everyone will make you happy
    But it will only leave you alone

    It seems you can´t simple count on others
    That you are alone in this world
    You think that nobody will accept what you are
    You are wrong, just give them a chance

    If the destruction don´t stop
    There will be no future, just nothing at all
    Open you heart, is that so hard?
    Trying to see and hear with your heart

    Steel clouds are forming in the sky
    But I will never give up
    I can feel everything breaking apart
    Why nobody can understand!?

    Life is not a thing to waste
    So don´t give up
    But understand:
    You need to stop now

    Life may be hard
    But you can make it better
    Don´t close yourself
    You will only end alone

    Just try to smile
    Don´t give up on rage
    It will end in nothing
    So cheer up

    You think you will get to something
    But everything is fading like sand
    Just understand:
    Open your heart now...
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    I kinda... Based it on a song >.>, and no, I am not depressed, just I feel like writing this.

    Conclusion: Life is hard but that doesn´t means you can´t make it better
     
  2. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Ooh nice...I love it~! Great job! :)
     
  3. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks ^^ :glomp:.
     
  4. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Another great poem, Chaser. You never cease to amaze me.


    I'd rep you again if it would let me.
     
  5. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks ^^, and is okay XD.
     
  6. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    You're totally welcome.

    You need to stop making so many good poems becuase my brain is overloading from their uberness. XD

     
  7. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    LOL, too late, I am already writing one in this moment XD.
     
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