One Sky....One Destiny...

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  1. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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    This story is based on a game KINGDOM HEARTS

    Enjoy

    I dedicate this story to my friend **Olette**

    One Sky.....One Desitiny....

    Flip flop plop Sora's breakfast sizzled on a frying pan. He looked up and

    sucked in his drool. ' Soooooo hungry!' He thought with awe of his luck. ' Thank

    the gods for Roxas' ability to cook!' He feel his eyes popping out of his head.

    " It's thank the gawds..." Namine said laughing. Her mind was as full with

    knowledge as the pan was with grease." Stop that mind freak!" Tidus put in

    while touching Yuna on the shoulder . " Whatev's!? It's not my fault he is so

    read-able..." Namine giggled . And they stared at her as if she where chucky . As

    shocked and scared as nervous. " Ok shut the **** up. Or I'll - "

    "Oh hi Riku...." Kairi seemed realaxed. And weird enough Sora just noticed she

    was there. " No foul language in the kitchen, Riku !?" Roxas smiled and turned to

    face him. " Just Joking man no need to run me over with that look of yours..."

    Another smile but this time it came from Olette. " Oh gawd! Just shut up!"

    She said winking at Kairi. Roxas tried his pancakes. " Dis is gweat nuff!" He said

    with his mouth full. " Roxas are you poor?" Namine asked. " No.."

    "Oh..Cause your making no cents..."

    Silence and shock came from the others. Namine of all people with a

    comeback?!
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    Hope you like it!
     
  2. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Well, I think you could have added more detail or emotion. It just needs a little something more, but it was good. :)

    Haha... I love those "Are you...?" jokes. ^_^
     
  3. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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    oh thanks I will try my best unlike my other stories I tried to make this one easier
    to read!
     
  4. Tootsie coquí

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    Awww I loved it!
    its cute!
    keep up the good work!
    ^-^
     
  5. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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