Traditional Art One of my Favorite Sketches.

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by LittleArtistNamine, Nov 7, 2008.

  1. LittleArtistNamine Destiny Islands Resident

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    This is a sketch of my cell-phone. When I scanned it, it was the wrong way, so excuse the backwards logos.

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    CnC please. It was a pretty quick sketch but on of my first trying to do three deminsional and shadows.
     
  2. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    Not bad, but it's kinda messy. I suggest that you sketch the basic design of the phone, THEN you should do the final pictuere.
     
  3. TacoGrenade King's Apprentice

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    Yeah pretty much what sho said. I can understand if it was a quick sketch but you might want to go back and clean it up a little. Then I can see a lot of potential.
     
  4. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Ar first I thought it was a car but then I noticed the buttons. I suggest that you draw teh lines more straight and nicely. I can think that it looks like something out of Digimon but I guess that's my imagination! ^^
     
  5. LittleArtistNamine Destiny Islands Resident

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    Yeah. As I said, it was a REALLY fast sketch 'cause I was ultimately bored... I can't really edit it anymore, 'cause I lost the original. Anyways, thanks;
    Lan.
     
  6. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Ah. I understand. Okay then. ^^
     
  7. Hissora ahurhurhur.

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    You say you were working on shading and realism, but yet I see no hint at shading, just... lines? And it looks very chicken scratchy.

    Here is a bit of advice:

    You really need to shade from the where the source of darknes or light it. I'ts hard to explain over the internet, but I'll try. You see on the middle rectangle you have the on the front of the phone? Well, I'm pretty sure if you would see the phone, and then the drawing, there wouldn't be those circulating lines like that on the real phone. And shading wouldn't be that same colour, because shadows vary from dark to light, not stay one colour.
     
  8. T A F F Y シ Hollow Bastion Committee

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    MY PHONE!! XD
    love it =]
    its a bet messy
    but that makes it sexy ;]​